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02-05-05, 11:05 PM
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.L.B.S. PUSHER.
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IP: 2C34 1356
Theres only one girl in my life
Shes so kind,sweet,a perfect lover to be a wife people always have to start somin wit her they just hate her cuz shes one of the best they say names to her, not posed to be effected cuz she couldn't be tested... thats y shes against all odds n shes above The Rest.. each time when i see her my heart feels warm each time when i dont get to see her my heart feels torn it may feel kinda awkward buh its tru your the one for me n i love u
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02-28-05, 12:00 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: A3EA 639E
this was ok but u need 2 elevate in ur rhymes, work on ur structure, & go into depth wit ur poems 4 future references ight overall it'z a 6/10 u'll get there ova time keep up the good work
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02-28-05, 12:48 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP: 0825 899A
Agreed^^, i thought it was cute for what it was, but i was waiting for something more to happen that caught my interest, just keep dropping and elevating, it will come..1
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