Voted For: oreo

Breakdown...

Name:OREO

Verse:
Kordazr get ya head cracked from behind, ill ask you how it feel
Only time your lyrics exercise a mind is putting the brian on a treadmill
Rap like r kelly having sex,mainly its only the youngins you fucking
Daffy is the best choice for you avy, cuz with out 20 posts you duckin*
Oreo listens but only hears good rap coming from your local radio tuner
Zip up ya grades cuz its like you got your fathers name, ya forever a junior**
Already squashing this emcce face it man your not a fearce opponent
Read a math book cuz ya rhyming abilty multiply's zero as an exponent***

Need/Don’t need to work on:Sup fam...beenm a minute...anyways um i think you got this..right now you dont have to work on anything bruh....nice shyt. just through in some multis.

Stats...
Punches:7/10
Metaphors:5/10
Wordplay:4/10
Structure:7/10
Personals:6/10
Multies:0/10
Total:29/50
Percentage:58.0%

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Name:Kordozar

Verse:
Zekes Professional Masturbator Iss His Work Occupation..
Located In Merktown Cincanatti Where He's That Onli Population..
He Stinks,On Tha Verge Of Bien Extinct Like Bison..
Uses His "Head" Tha Most Out Of His Crew Of Wisemen..
Zeke And Oreo 2 Pussies In Love Who Host Dykes..
Left Kester Dead Along Time Ago,So Thass Why Oreo Ask Him Ta Ghost Write..
Brotha Who "Acts"A "Sista" Quit Singin Like Whoopi...
During 3 Somes His Tha Creme In Tha Middle Like His Selftitled Cookie..


Need/Don’t need to work on:hey...um..overall a "meh" verse...nothin special...work on everything....had personals though...

Stats:
Punches:4/10
Metaphors:4/10
Wordplay:0/10
Structure:5/10
Personals:7/10
Multies:0/10
Total:20/10
Percentage:40.0%

RTF in the sig against J DOT...personally felt i won....hope you feel the same way..

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