This is what happens when you fuck with my mans, kid. .

It's my turn to speak, you faggot. . leave you beat and stabbed, kid
Cause I keep getting Paranoid. . that your shit is even seen as average
Talkin like you good. . pulled one offer, but I'll keep breaking ya mans
You denied The fucking Jury. .
. .too bad I'm subpoened, so I'll take the stand
I'm not understanding it though. . I mean, you won't be beating this
The only O. response you get is when the crew leader peeps your shit
Sick of seein you spit. . I merk dudes and continue to smack queers
While your busy reppin crews that havent been good since LAST YEAR
I'll make you meet your crew, when I drop you, got a splinter yet?
But you're rolling with the Hardwood when you're NOT on the internet
You ain't been a vet. . your audio is shit too, got people like oh, no
Then make your blood Trickle so much. .
. .you'd think Limited Edtion had rapped the song solo
Motherfucker. . you're trash, so I'll just leave ya braked and rattled
Your audios sound more like when a nerd recaps a game of scrabble

Here's a link to the picture of his CD cover;
http://img1.imagetitan.com/img.php?...428043737_l.jpg

Shit looks amateur like, while I'm handling knives, you can't rap with me
You had one chance to make your art look good. .
. .and you even failed that with ease
And those ugly walls. . weren't from time or the fucking ownings, kid
Those were fingernails breaking as people'd try to stop from opening it
Nobody wants to listen. . your a faggot, and don't make me repeat it
Cause your name's blended into the backround. .
. .and now you're just praying that nobody will see it
I'm just looking at the backround, fuck all the shit I've seen and did
But that's the same fucking alley that your mom tried to leave you in
Enough of that shit though, you cant spit yo. . aint ownin this match
. .So I'll just take a Para. . sneakers and kick them both up your ass
You fucking fat peice of shit. . just know that you ain't gonna die little
But the Hills Have Eyes. .
. .well in your case, just oversized nipples
I'll cut out your fucking eyes. . make a point that I'm stopping this shit
And make you read so much Braille, maybe you'll finally hop off his dick
Just leave him to spit.. STFU is that clique. . leave you dead and dull
But we're getting Paranoid. .
. .about how we're going to pay for your fucking funeral

Just fall the fuck back, man. . Don't start some shit with my squad. .

If you want to stay on that bullshit tip you better expect me to actually try and drop 50 more lines like it's nothing. . Man, I'm ASKING you to respond. . Get some friends together. . It's whatever. . Either that or shut the fuck up.

In-Vision. . Braille. . I got your back, dude.

Haha. . peace. .

(The Diss Track forum is inactive. . I want feedback on this shit, mods. .

. .I didn't do this shit just so I could see my own damn verses in a thread)

Links:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223910
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=187948

Leave a link in your response and I'll return the feedback. .

Decent diss man. I'm not gona quote the whole piece and pick it apart, because I could give a fuck, but it wasnt too bad... it had the emotion, lacked the playable punches I'd have rather seen.

No need to rtf, I havent dropped shit in two months, was just seein what the OM was doin' lately.

Peace.

Edit - More playable punches... cos' you had a few just not as much as I like in a diss.

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It was straight...........

I'm just looking at the backround, fuck all the shit I've seen and did
But that's the same fucking alley that your mom tried to leave you in
^

that shit made me laugh...

wordplay could of been a little more complex, but its an aight diss Mim, keep it poppin partna'...

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Yeah, I didn't go all out. . I could have easily gone 30-50 more lines because I had enough ideas to do it. . I just needed to get it up because I said I would and I was tired as hell. .

Whatever.

Damn some nice punches in there. It was kinda simple, but effective.

The flow was smooth, but the wordage could've been a lil sharper

overall soild verse

this was decent.....very unique way to approach the OM session.....nice vocab and multies with imagery emotion...8/10

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^ I'm willing to bet that you didn't read it. .

this is exactly what i wanted to see.....i don't feel like it's your best.....but it's definately good...and something paranoid is never gonna come back from....he'll be lucky to walk again after readin that shit.......i'm gonna try and drop mine by the end of the night....and anyone who has a beef with paranoid..or just hates how whack he is..feel free to IM me or mimesis

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"watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox

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Ha. . I know it's not my best. . I just wanted to spark the shit. .

If he responds you and me can just demolish him.

And word. . I'll peep yours when you post it up.

i did read it homes....you gettin ur dagws back homes....i did read it MIM!

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Oh. . whatever then. . Thanks for the feedback.

This was nice as shit. Spittin the real from what it sounds like(or reads like) but anyways this was dope as shit but i seen some nicer shit than that. Too much to quote though but i was liking that little Hardwood line even though it was dissing my crew. But yeah i didn't even know dude was in H.W.C. but anyways nice drop though. But if Para wanna make something out of it then i guess some lines going to have to come your way just cuz he down with just like you did. But no hate or feelings this was nice
8.5/10. Stay up.
RTF on my OM thats linked in my sig

~1~

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