Book of Genesis #2 (God Creates the World)

I’m beckon to say that on the second day after a burst of truth
God realized the earth needs a roof a protective covering with proof
Of directives hovering above such as rain clouds so god created
The sky and I’m devastated why man ignore and not educated
About the book of Genesis I’m shook on the premises of reading
The bible and leading disciples on the road to Heaven and breeding
The brain with Christ knowledge and put the vice on garbage no tune
For a showroom of stupidity, the skies were name heaven and soon
Like Seven Eleven its on every corner and the stars are angels and they
Stick out like a sore thumb and more to come and like the word say
On the third day he separated land from water now thing stand in order
And now the creation of man was close at hand and god’s plan never falters
Also mountains and plains fountains and canes rose from the waters god altered
Thing, now dry land appear it was a becoming sight even in the rumbling
Of night under the moon and the clouds with thunder soon and the tumbling
Rain will fall down and all around wetness will prevail leaving rain and crumbling
Mud holes I love those splashing on the wheels of my ride for god no fumbling
But today because of the criminal situation we need general education
To produce well-rounded scholars in biblical knowledge and dedication

my link (http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2621498)

2 links, actually

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2 Links of actuall feed giz bucket, not what you linked.

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Blow It - Topical

come on MENTALZ you a whack bitch that's why I dissed you if you're not gonna properly respond stay the fuck out my thread

This Piece Was good, nothing amazing, but it was nice......i liked your rhyming and your flow was ok, off a bit in a few places. you should try to get more into that topic, that seemed more like a summary up.

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