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Old 08-28-06, 06:02 PM   #1
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I Love Her 2 Death******

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FEEL ME!!!!!!

i aint made from patato so i dont have the most chips
100% puerto rican but still not her spic
when it comes to sizes, i really dont have the biggest dick
an even thou i follow her flow, she still dump me like shit
i cant keep on doing this cuz sometimes she makes me wanna cry
ever since i meet her i prayed for our bless'in but now its why
thought i did it all, from walk in the park to dorney park rydes
from looking with-in her heart to giving her space on the outside
but from the inside i was trap'ed, believeing her every word from her yap
i mean mouth... but ever since she went to N.C i wish she never came back

i just cant do it, an sometimes i wounder why
ever suince we meet i thought u was the one
i thought this is the way life should be
but now i know, dont count u'r blessin ...truely
cuz its never a right time to play but she played u'rs truely...
* i cant believe this *

an now that your back, you look in my face as if it was a mistake
but 9 1/2 hour drive.... i mean danm... its like u couldnt wait...
now i gotta figuer out what i need, should i stay or should i leave
is it really ova? or is it ova the same shit suffercating me till i cant breath
i really dont feel the same way i did, now my life is ova cuz of what this bitch did
thought she was my way to live, now i cant hold my tears as i hold my only kid
went from having will power to smoking a pack of cigs every hour
if i can pull out my feeling for you.... it surely would get devoured
feel like cleaning up my act............................................... ......................................
but once the water hits i think about the dirt
got sliced on my face an told the doc to wait.............................................. .........
cuz the thought of what my baby did is what really hurts

i just cant do it, an sometimes i wounder why
ever suince we meet i thought u was the one
i thought this is the way life should be
but now i know, dont count u'r blessin ...truely
cuz its never a right time to play but she played u'rs truely...
* i cant believe this *

i know why people cheat, but to make me think it was sweet was cheap
if i saw u with him..... it would be like u'r period cuz i would let u leak
from ya face to ya feet, to my place up in the sweap u will play with my meat
cuz to be honest i thought i loved you but you love to get beat
so from the back i start to hit it, thinking danm she screaming now i done did it
every motion so provoking for harder stroking
the way u'r face so blue bloods i'll think this bitch is loc'in
flip the bitch ova, saw her face thought it was ova
pushed her head foward till it look like her neck can ben-ova
told the bitch i'll give u 1 last ryde pick the benz or the rover?
ahh fuck it dont say a word... tossed the bitch in an pushed her ova
100 down the highway thinking of green like a clover
all i saw was red an blue on her top like cops when they pull u ova
so after i stop i can tell her blood was rushing for me but i knew it was ova
you played me for the last time, saw the deep drop an thought am out my mind
i cant do this.... so as i went to grab her back she slip's away for the last time
thought about my kid with my moms an thought thats fine............................
so as i went to save her...... like a rehabilitated def person.... i just ignor the CLIFF DANGER "SIGN'S"........


there never a right time to say good-bye
so if she died...... might as-well listen to R.kelly an see if i can fly......

see you in the after life.....


* all that was left was he's t-shirt that said SHE WAS MINES With A tatoo that said I Love Her To Death!!! *
 
Old 08-28-06, 06:23 PM   #2
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i liked it it was similiar to something i wrote in the topic young games on the second page

but can you return the favor in give me feedback on heads 2 da sky-wiley d
 
Old 08-29-06, 02:50 AM   #3
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thanks man i will look for it
 
Old 08-29-06, 02:17 PM   #4
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upp'in this joint man
 
Old 08-29-06, 03:41 PM   #5
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lol man, i liked your peice becuase i thought it was funny as fuck....


i aint made from patato so i dont have the most chips
100% puerto rican but still not her spic
when it comes to sizes, i really dont have the biggest dick
an even thou i follow her flow, she still dump me like shit

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Old 08-29-06, 03:48 PM   #6
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Two links to feedback you have left on others open mics or this will be closed.

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Old 08-31-06, 09:56 AM   #10
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Save me the time, don't post anything like this again.

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