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Old 06-11-05, 08:15 PM   #1
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To you alone, I give
Those intangible,
Inexpressable emotions
That a heart may hold;
The extremity of faith;
The calmness of trust;
The beneficent beauty of understanding,
And the tenderness of love.
Small bits of broken laughter,
And the faint, shy whisper of appeal.
The unfathomable deeps of desire,
And the quietude of peace.
Yet these I may not offer
Untinged with silent grief,
For mingling there
With beauty, hope and dreams,
Is sorrow.
The shadow of her bitterness lies deep,
And my needs must give to you
Her tears as well.
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Old 06-12-05, 09:32 AM   #2
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uppin..........
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Old 06-12-05, 03:25 PM   #3
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im really feeling this
good stuff
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Old 06-12-05, 06:29 PM   #4
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thanks uppin...
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Old 06-13-05, 10:56 PM   #5
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yeah i liked this.. as i imagined the person reading this.. just laying there heart out.. it was such a good piece and i could really feel it... good job man..
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Old 06-13-05, 11:08 PM   #6
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Old 06-14-05, 07:42 PM   #7
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by the time i got to the end of it i wished it was longer ..i really enjoyed this peice. the imagery was there and all. vocab was def there and emotion. i like your style and how you write your poetry
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Old 06-14-05, 07:50 PM   #8
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thanks man. .
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Old 06-17-05, 10:23 PM   #9
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imagery is lovely
deep poem

liked the read
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