I'll post my verse in the morning make sure you drop T u requested our battle lol

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alright, but let me know how many lines you doing
i got 3 other battles i gotta drop for

Let me warm up lol g/l Tav

Im diss'n clowns who learn they're, no match when my words there
Go wild for days, ya style is plaid, but im not misprounce'n da shirtwear
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Multies my style, while homie u hardly can spit, let me mention ur neglected n' sorry as shit
U can call me a bitch, prick u fall'n with this, i'll make ur addition sit-com like bobby n' whit
Come w/ monster spits, clock n' pop ya bitch ya shit is gay, cuz facts is u not stop'n this
I've cop'd the win, cuz frankly with the spot ur in, u beat'n me is unheard of like lobster lips


Try to drop me, i get it crack'n like concrete, stop T, ur going no where with ya plot frees
Off my cock please, leave rattled n' cocky, battle'd mad heads but still have yet shock'd me
Like hemorrhoids my ass is ill, my raps are real, clap n' personals safe to say da facts'll kill
U vs. me? ur way overmatched in skills, but im itch'n to get @ this pussy without da vagisil
I'll leave ya soul crushed, nice rec but so what, dome bust, then creamated n' bones dust
U get'n no luck, throw flame i'll roll up, but neva met a metal opponent, i doubt this foes tuff
Ya kno what? bow down pussy i'll grade ya tho, on call u could cut a cell wita razor phone
Hated hoe, fuck how did u make it tho?, brown bags in water's how T change his flow
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Swept and broom'd this victim, my multies heavy and fused with sickness
U wack see, you only got half my keys like a petty apprentice to musicians
Fuck it your rhyme'ns a sin, OMB is next, and your not liver then him
U gangsta? bitch ur fresh ink, i kno you've never serve time in a pen

Match Me...N. Tav lets get this to legends homie

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alright 18 lines you posted, ima try and match you today latest tomorrow morning i didnt think you'd show so i didnt start writing

Well if its possible drop by today

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sorry for the half ass, i gotta get writing for my other battles too


this knife leave U soaking you'll be broken in two, provoking ya doom
from open tombs you'll go from mr. multi to mr. multiple wounds
im breezing em by, mad skills, son believe its no lie
the only thing you do good i champed the league in 05'
get punches thrown to ya stomach so let me know if you want it
and leave em smoking longer than chain smoking 100's
Me, all in, the way ya teams falling seems appalling
I'll make you fly so high Jim Jones'll scream "ballliiiiinnnnng"
Take some for the road, land punches when I swung for his nose
When Mr hand key,his verse resemble da one on dat show
Multi on the brink of regret, think he a threat but "I'm Simply the Best"
your shit puts cats to sleep mine'll have em resisting arrest
wrap it up, you dont practice enough, you wack ass fuck
who uses multi's in they rhymes to mask the fact that they suck?
Im trashing this geek, you asking for beef? get back in ya seat
I'll smash ya teeth on on concrete so you can rap for the streets
Your a practical dumb spoof,Already mastered my gun use
And take ya dome off like it came with a retractable sun roof

for a multi battle, this shit was straight.. but majority of both of you's work was kinda forced.. like yo'd go off of the same rhyme until you ran outta words which makes it choppy and off to me. for example:

tav.

Me, all in, the way ya teams falling seems appalling
I'll make you fly so high Jim Jones'll scream "ballliiiiinnnnng"

yeah, i know you got teams falling, then scream ballllllliiiiiinnnnng or w/e, but the end rhyme seems appalling has an extra syllable which makes it flow different.


Multi on the brink of regret, think he a threat but "I'm Simply the Best"
your shit puts cats to sleep mine'll have em resisting arrest

k, so once again brink and simp don't exactly rhyme when i slow it down.. sayig it extra fast is forced btw.

mr. multie.


really you just forced to much shit in one line.. like you really had stretched lines for text which when i spit it aloud breath control was kinda bad in certain places. you had lines that were cool when it came to flow, but being able to keep goin seemed kinda weird to me, just my opinion though, digg? i kinda found some stuff repetitive.. well, more so soundin the same.


k, so both of you KNOW what multis are, of course..

mr. multie probably should've came with more than 2 syllable multis in his verse.. yeah, some were longer, but some were ust two syllable all the way through and the flow was predictable at times.

ehh.. tav seemed more in order to me.. like from the openin 2 lines i thought his verse would be really tight but maybe cause it was rushed it seemed a little off sorta. but tav still came better for a multi battle if you ask me..

v/ tav.. just my thoughts.

meh..when i spit it out loud its fine to me but thas wassup the object was to have the most multis so i basically did bout 3 in each line and if u spit it right it wont sound stretched

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i know what a mutli battle is lol.
i know you had a lot of multis in each lines..
but it didnt flow smooth. that's my only point.
if it doesn't sound smooth when i spit it,
then the multis are only half effective

it's just my thoughts though man,
if you want you can deduct my vote.

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3085387
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...388#post3085388
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3085391
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3085394

really, multie might had more multies... but i don't think that was the whole idea of the battle.. i think it was the idea of still punching with hella multies...


IMO i thought Tav had iight multies n delivered a witty punch with them

that makes me lean to him... prop's to both...


shit ima have to hop in 1 these next time


V/tav

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i'm not sure how i'm meant to be voting here.. is it meant to go to who had the best multi's, or who had the best diss verse in general? lol

i'd score both to n.taverez anyway.. i defintley think in terms of quantity mr multi had it, but taverz used his multi's a lot better in conjunction with his punches. i liked his opener.. even if the sylabell count was a bit uneven at the begining of his punch. i liked taverz resisting arrest line.. multi's in the set up were cool and the punch wasn't too bad either. i actually liked mr multi's closer.. weird thing was there was no multi's in that set lol.

v/ n.taverez

werd...felt that Tav. came away with a clean win here. Mr. Multi did his thing no doubt but fell hella short to me in the punch category. Still had to drop them fists on nigga.

Tav was pretty effective thru-out his verse and the flow was better than his opponents.

V/ N Tav.

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