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11-29-03, 03:01 AM | #1 | |||
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" Complicated Man " ( An alright Drop )
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" Complicated Man "
Im a complicated man, but have the best intintions Try hard to listen, But theres always something im missen Mind's twitchen, Harder times seem to keep itchen But do I stand tall, no, I wait for there redemtion I face conflicts, but cannot face with emotions Dreams have my divotion, Mind denize to be open Im imploden inside, and loosen my drive The bullet caught in the barrel, the effect of an explosion Im hopin to get out this habit, but im blocked by static Im a magnit to Drama, call me the addict actions Drastic, Driving with out the seat-belt fascend Body lastin, but can I handle the next infraction Complicated, thats my main description A man, with a plan, but must concur other missions on a diffrent station, living in unheard locations no time for vacation, geting caught in my own nation... im in my own zone, having problems with my thrown mind blown, weekness shown, takin to my home I cant handle my problems, and they tend to produce ingrown roots, punches now shoot, money turning into loot... These are my problems, I will solve them with a plan Im not normal, I handle things diffrent... Im a " Complicated Man " You gotta really think deep in every line to get how it relates. Thats how I try to do all of my flows. So tell me what yall think. OUT -High Class a.k.a Confusion
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11-29-03, 03:02 AM | #2 | |||
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95193 - Explicit http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94713 - Handcuffs http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5285#post945285 - Jego
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11-29-03, 05:36 AM | #3 | ||||||
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this was a nice drop.... you flowed throughout well, and had very good vocab... the only thing u need to work on is your rhyming skills, some multis would be nice.... but overall it was pretty good
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11-29-03, 01:08 PM | #4 | |||
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aight thanks for the replie hommie. You tryna get into a crew ma brotha? Cause if so, try out for DOI. I think you would do good in there. Uppin for more replies peoplez.
OUT -High Class a.k.a Confusion
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11-29-03, 02:23 PM | #5 | |||
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Uppin for some more replies hommies, cmon dont sleep on me......
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11-29-03, 02:34 PM | #6 | ||||||
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I Liked It....
Deep Piece With A Good Vocab, Plus U Didn't Stretch Ur Bars & Kept A Constant Flow... Keep It Up Nucca.... "These are my problems, I will solve them with a plan Im not normal, I handle things diffrent... Im a " Complicated Man "" I Can Relate To That... 1... |
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11-29-03, 04:03 PM | #7 | |||
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Thanks alot hommie. Yea, and there ait nothin wrong wit us hommie. LOL . Aight then, uppin for some more replies then.
OUT -High Class a.k.a Confusion
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11-29-03, 05:07 PM | #8 | |||||||
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Yeah... i lookin forward to peepin at least one of ya cyph's... but i'm glad it was this one... u put good spin in it too...just what i was hopin to be lookin for... i mean really if u can judge other lyric's an give crit... proved yo self to me...
Good Lyric's , Use of Vocab an all... flow was there... everthing.. an i can tell... u can spit way harder... ( audio yet?) if no... i can get you there... on3 |
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11-29-03, 06:12 PM | #9 | |||
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I use to be audio, but I gave my equipment away. How can you hook me up hommie? Thanks for the replie, and I will go peep ya flows to. Aight hommies, UPPIN.
OUT -High Class a.k.a Confusion
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11-29-03, 06:24 PM | #10 | ||||||
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Word, This Was Pretty Deep. Like You Said In Your Title, It Was An Alright Drop. Ya Never Lost Ya Flow, Which With Me, Is A Big Plus. You Had The Vocab Yet Maintained Great Structure And Didn't Stretch Lines. . Not Many Can Do That, Nah I'm Sayin? Keep Um Comin Man.
Im hopin to get out this habit, but im blocked by static Im a magnit to Drama, call me the addict ^^^ Feelin That. . Don't Worry Cuz, Wherever I Am, Drama Is Right There Too. -Formula. Lemme Get Some Feed On This. . Maybe Break It Down For Me? Good Lookin Either Way. . http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95155 |
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11-29-03, 06:49 PM | #11 | |||
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Aight hommie, I will go check this out. And you in a collab with ma boy, he in a crew with me. Its a littlelong to break down line by line, but I will. Uppin for me Votes.
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11-29-03, 11:55 PM | #12 | |||
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Uppin for some more replies, UPPIN
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