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6 -10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
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Check in by: 01-16-05 at 06:14 PM

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C.A.L.I has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-14-05 11:50 PM.

FuxJustAWord has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-14-05 11:50 PM.

atleast its 300 posts i guess............. but FL???? cuz i dont want someone votin in this who isnt on the site enough to get this......... ohhh well......

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

Herbish faker damn perpatraitior yous a 'Sonic' groupie
'Datruth' you couldnt smoke a herb in a chronic movie!!(1)
Occupations listed as 'Grilling Mathafuckas' ......damn yous a loser(2)
Bow to to my 'Godlyness' my 'Disciple' you from the land of 'Hoover'(3)
'B' you 'Dizzy' think i would just give you a win(4)
Ya records like old rims...............no spins!!(5)
'Fuxjustaword'.....well it is till i 'Fux' 'Fux' up with verbs
Cuz 'Fux' just a 'Fux' up 'Fux'ed up 'Fux'ing computer nerd
This real 'Easy' for 'E' no wonder you changed ya sig picture(6)
Ya verse is looking 'BAD BOY' and i aint talking bout 'Big' wit ya

EXPLANATIONS SORRY SO LONG BUT THERES MAD PERSONALS
1-SONICS ALAIS IS DATRUTH THIS HERB FUXJUSTAWORD MADE A ACCOUNT ON SONICS NAME WHEN HE CHANGED IT AND PRETENDED TO BE SONIC
2-HIS OCCUPATION SAYS GRILLING MATHAFUCKAS
3-HES FROM CHICAGO HOME OF LARRY HOOVER HEAD OF THE GANSTA 'DISICPLES
4-B DIZZY IS HIS ALAIS
5-NOBODY LISTENS TO HIS AUDIOS
6-HE USED TO HAVE EAZY E IN HIS SIG IM 'E' AS EVERYONE CALLS ME CUZ MY OLD NAME WAS EMPIRE

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this pisses me off cuz i got like 16-10 lines and gotta choose wat i think is the best of em, but here it goes.......

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

16-20* .

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

CALI thinks he's ahead me, his old avvy thinks he beheads me
the "king of Beef' ? I know! we've all heard about Wendy's
So it tempts me, to see if u "bite," wen u've got more beef than fuckin cattle
Don't look back after dumpin shit? so ill be the only one to up this battle
Givin u parkinson’s, ur left shook and rattled, thats y u have no precision or aim
cuz in this battle, ur punches land farther apart than ur location and name
cmon mayne, u even think ur a n****, i figure uve got ur freckles mixin with facts
but to step back, its no suprise, wen u have the whole site "listed" as black"
atleast a job "well done" with the "beef" there, but nothin surrenders my brew
and wit my "raw" lyrics ur chances are "rare",....................
.................................................. .........cuz my punches'll tenderize you



ahhhh, If u don’t get most my punches, than don’t vote on the battle
-Parkinson’s is the disease Ali and Michael J. Fox have, wen ur always shaking, incase u don’t know
-In this thread this guy asked if they look back at their shit after takin a dump…. CALI sed no (incase the link doesn’t work)

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

wait?????? wen did i have Easy E in my sig?!?!?! ive had like two sigs my whole rv experience....... the one right there...... and that one that was like "Gangsta Sesame Street" characters wit Elmo carryin a gat and shit......

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if u win this battle its gonna be too funny......
ok first bar was decent, the sonic thing was good, even though the whole "smokin an herb" thing is pretty much played....

2nd bar....... occupation grillin mothafuckas..... well u grill beef, and ur beef, so i guess that means ull get grilled too........ and u really need an explanation for that hoover shit cuz im thinkin 9 outa 10 people wont get that punch without that explanation

3d bar..... decent...... would be totally played if u hadnt added in the B-Dizzy thing...... but extremely throws off the rest of ur flow/structure

4th bar.... tha fuck?????lmap, nice multis i guess(?), but u juss spelled Fuck 'fux' 5 times or sumthin..... and im the computer nerd wen u post on this site 50 times a day????

5th bar...... its just all false information unless u prove it to me.... thinkin u must have me confused with Cool Kol B or sum shit man..... im not tryna hate on u, but that was never true....

so u basically have 2 decent bars, but with played concepts in em.... im juss hopin we get some people who have been here long enough to realize some of ur shit makes no sense..... lmao


but goodluck man..... lmao

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

good battle........................................

CALI thinks he's ahead me, his old avvy thinks he beheads me
the "king of Beef' ? I know! we've all heard about Wendy's
MADDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD PLAYED MADD MADD MADD PLAYED AND ITS BEEN SAID ABOUT ME MADD TIMES SO WACK
So it tempts me, to see if u "bite," wen u've got more beef than fuckin cattle
Don't look back after dumpin shit? so ill be the only one to up this battle
GARBAGE HOW IM GONNA UP WHEN YOU AINT DROP?NO PUNCH WACK
Givin u parkinson’s, ur left shook and rattled, thats y u have no precision or aim
cuz in this battle, ur punches land farther apart than ur location and name
FILLER WAS GARBAGE PUNCH WAS OK ALSO PLAYED AND USED BEFORE
cmon mayne, u even think ur a n****, i figure uve got ur freckles mixin with facts
but to step back, its no suprise, wen u have the whole site "listed" as black"
MAKES NO SENSE AT ALL ANOTHER NO PUNCH JUST SHIT TALKING
atleast a job "well done" with the "beef" there, but nothin surrenders my brew
and wit my "raw" lyrics ur chances are "rare",....................
.................................................. .........cuz my punches'll tenderize you
WACK AGAIN AND MADD STRECHED
SO I GUESS EVEN IF I HAVE 2 PUNCHES WHICH I HAVE WAY MORE ITLL STILL BEAT NONE WHICH YOU HAVE

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Voted For: C.A.L.I

V/C.A.L.I.....got batttle to both but cali gets my vote he had original punchs that were creative an no streched lines it was easy read.... fuxjusaword...u had sum good lines but ur diss's werent as consistent as cali an u had alot of streched lines......
punchs=cali
vocab=cali
structure=cali
overall=cali
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honestly this was a close battle...........

CALI...........
Herbish faker damn perpatraitior yous a 'Sonic' groupie
'Datruth' you couldnt smoke a herb in a chronic movie!!(1)
nice opener...set up line was a good personal...all around good bar

Occupations listed as 'Grilling Mathafuckas' ......damn yous a loser(2)
Bow to to my 'Godlyness' my 'Disciple' you from the land of 'Hoover'(3)
good wordplay here.....good personals

'B' you 'Dizzy' think i would just give you a win(4)
Ya records like old rims...............no spins!!(5)
another good personal....hit pretty well

'Fuxjustaword'.....well it is till i 'Fux' 'Fux' up with verbs
Cuz 'Fux' just a 'Fux' up 'Fux'ed up 'Fux'ing computer nerd
good play off of name....

This real 'Easy' for 'E' no wonder you changed ya sig picture(6)
Ya verse is looking 'BAD BOY' and i aint talking bout 'Big' wit ya
good personal in set up line.....2nd line was simple but it worked and hit good


fuxjustaword.................
CALI thinks he's ahead me, his old avvy thinks he beheads me
the "king of Beef' ? I know! we've all heard about Wendy's
good personal....nice opener....

So it tempts me, to see if u "bite," wen u've got more beef than fuckin cattle
Don't look back after dumpin shit? so ill be the only one to up this battle
nice punch and personal.....set up line was weak though...2nd line was nice

Givin u parkinson’s, ur left shook and rattled, thats y u have no precision or aim
cuz in this battle, ur punches land farther apart than ur location and name
nice....prolly your best bar here

cmon mayne, u even think ur a n****, i figure uve got ur freckles mixin with facts
but to step back, its no suprise, wen u have the whole site "listed" as black"
good personal........

atleast a job "well done" with the "beef" there, but nothin surrenders my brew
and wit my "raw" lyrics ur chances are "rare",....................
.................................................. .........cuz my punches'll tenderize you
pretty nice closer here....



structure- tie
personals- CALI....both had nice personal in just about every bar....but calis were more complex so i had to give this to him
punches- tie



pretty much this was an even battle except for complexity....so cali gets this with complexits in my opinion.....good verses from both of you.....return the favor.....link in sig




dammit.....not enough posts to vote....fuckin shit i wrote all that bull shit for nothin....well im postin it anyways just for feedback on the battle.......FUCK IM PISSED.....lol

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