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Da Vinci | 5 | 100.00% | |
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07-31-04, 02:32 AM | #1 |
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Da Vinci vs intensify effect
IP: 19F7 7629
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6 bars No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting good luck fam-o Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 07-31-04 at 04:12 AM Must drop verse in 1100 minutes after check in. |
07-31-04, 02:35 AM | #2 | |
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IP: 19F7 7629
intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 02:35 AM.
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07-31-04, 02:36 AM | #3 | |
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IP: 95FF 1D86
Da Vinci has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 02:36 AM.
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07-31-04, 08:43 PM | #4 |
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IP: 95FF 1D86
Want to Intesify your verse keep it under a microscope,
Only thing it effects is your Loss column,’n’ even that’s a joke I.E try’n to set an example of how lose a battle quickly Put em in so many pieces, leave his alias as humpty dumpty I caught this wackass herb laugh’n at my “half-ass” verse (till he realized he was at the bottom of this page and read’n his first.) See your old enough* to know better so really what’s your excuse I could write this verse in white-out, a win, ya still couldn’t execute Cause your in over your head like your coming out the womb Take your wack shit to U.F, cause here we got no room, Doesn’t take C.S.I to find why this battle’ll leave yea dead This verse is keen ta target ya self esteem, leave ya on ya death bed *= he’s 21 |
07-31-04, 08:52 PM | #5 |
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IP: 19F7 7629
Da Vinci weak, so hes only defense is to snap like a crab
and this battle gonna get "bloody", like da "bitch forgot to bring a pad" ya punches be sad, i see why u stressin ya like "shaq jumpin", about to "fall" off the battle in "2 seconds" da vinci a battler?, so I heard but hes verse looks are deceiving Got tons of guns?, but ya best shot at a punch is aiming at ya ceiling ya best bet is to quit now and train with me cuz play'in in the "WNBA", only time u had a "bitch with D" (bra size D ) Fuck Telling’ me how ur ill, an how ya talent is wicked the height of ur career is legal grounds for midget's I’v realized ya not as nice as you say I searched ya 4 ya ill shit, and woundup wit less ‘writes’ then a slave BITCH BANG BANG EARLY.... my rhymes is blessed with raw, game- let's take a pause my punchlines "add hand to mouth", like im "test'in ya jaw" |
07-31-04, 08:54 PM | #6 |
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IP: 19F7 7629
that last line dont count....
that was for a punchline battle ..... |
07-31-04, 10:28 PM | #7 |
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IP: 95FF 1D86
Alright OMIT the last line yall so he can use it, in his punchline battle, and let's get some votes on this, honest votes will be returned ASAP. !!
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07-31-04, 10:36 PM | #8 | |
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IP: 5ADA ED8B
Voted For: intensify effect
i gota give it 2 da vince..it wuz close as hell but he won it with the line about him readin his first...gota give it 2 u... v/d return favor please Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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07-31-04, 10:37 PM | #9 | |
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: Da Vinci
yo both of yaw verses was tight man double prps 2 both 4 real ok let me break down my bote openerA VINCI flow: DA VINCI personals: DA VINCI structure: I.E. punches: DA VINCI vote/ DA VINCI return da favor and vote on my battles please 4 real return da favor don't jus ignore me lol ~1~ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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07-31-04, 10:38 PM | #10 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5ADA ED8B
i voted 4 the wrong person..how do u chang ur vote?
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07-31-04, 10:42 PM | #11 | |
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IP: 95FF 1D86
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WTF? I think this cat pressed the wrong button cause he was gonna vote for me but the poll say's he voted for the other guy.
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07-31-04, 10:56 PM | #12 | ||
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This was feedback posted for intensify effect
IP: 5671 DBDD
vincci dumpty and puickly dont rhyme!!!i hate niggas that do that.the rest of your verse was good and you had a good flow and struture your personal was ok but simple a 4/10
intensity your lines are streched struture needs improvement and your punches are weaker then ninncis as are your disses and you have no personals the midget line 2/10 and the ending was a 3/10 vinnci had a better verse write the verse in white out 5/10 he gets the vote with the overall better verse vote-davincci give honest votes on my battles dr votes will get you banned
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07-31-04, 11:21 PM | #13 |
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IP: 70B9 DA4C
Voted For: Da Vinci
I.E Da Vinci weak, so hes only defense is to snap like a crab and this battle gonna get "bloody", like da "bitch forgot to bring a pad" Period lines r played ya punches be sad, i see why u stressin ya like "shaq jumpin", about to "fall" off the battle in "2 seconds" OK idea, would of had more impact if worded better da vinci a battler?, so I heard but hes verse looks are deceiving Got tons of guns?, but ya best shot at a punch is aiming at ya ceiling Flows off, bars blah ya best bet is to quit now and train with me cuz play'in in the "WNBA", only time u had a "bitch with D" (bra size D ) Nah, worded horribly Fuck Telling’ me how ur ill, an how ya talent is wicked the height of ur career is legal grounds for midget's Yeah it's ok, once again your wording hurting your punches I’v realized ya not as nice as you say I searched ya 4 ya ill shit, and woundup wit less ‘writes’ then a slave BITCH Oooo, pretty good if not a tad stretched BANG BANG EARLY.... Not too early now my rhymes is blessed with raw, game- let's take a pause my punchlines "add hand to mouth", like im "test'in ya jaw" 'add hand to mouth... is like testin ya jaw'... nope don't get it Alot of good ideas in your lines, take a little more time wording them better & you should hav meteor like impact w/ your punches.Flow was on & off Da Vinci Want to Intesify your verse keep it under a microscope, Only thing it effects is your Loss column,’n’ even that’s a joke Umm can't see his loss column sadly, this new system fucked that punch up I.E try’n to set an example of how lose a battle quickly Put em in so many pieces, leave his alias as humpty dumpty LOL... I caught this wackass herb laugh’n at my “half-ass” verse (till he realized he was at the bottom of this page and read’n his first.) Clever, lol See your old enough* to know better so really what’s your excuse I could write this verse in white-out, a win, ya still couldn’t execute Ok Cause your in over your head like your coming out the womb Take your wack shit to U.F, cause here we got no room, It's ok Doesn’t take C.S.I to find why this battle’ll leave yea dead This verse is keen ta target ya self esteem, leave ya on ya death bed Soft closure Obviously got some skill, punches were consistent, the last bar being the only one I wasn't feeling.Flow was off V/Da Vinci;Better verse overall. Now follow my links, yes you know you want to. |
07-31-04, 11:27 PM | #14 |
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IP: 62EA 10BE
Voted For: Da Vinci
I caught this wackass herb laugh’n at my “half-ass” verse (till he realized he was at the bottom of this page and read’n his first.) Damn, that line was so fucking sick Da Vinci. Neither of you guys had very good verses, but Da Vinci's was easier to read, and as far as I'm concerned, that line I postd killed effect right away. Intensify, you had a good drop too, but not as good. Da Vinci weak, so hes only defense is to snap like a crab and this battle gonna get "bloody", like da "bitch forgot to bring a pad" That was your best line, but it couldn't compete. Good battle though.
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08-01-04, 09:59 AM | #15 | |
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IP: 174F F657
Voted For: Da Vinci
betta punchlines on that shit imtesify effect used som lines frm the before battle with som1 i forgot u just used betta stucture and you hit him 2 da head Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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