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07-28-05, 06:59 PM | #1 | |
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1st Drop (AGAIN)
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this is a freestyle...totally off the head....and its my first..so dont be harsh..lol...
Like Common, Im "Something To Be" Im so Gangster, Pussy Chicks Dont Wana "Fuck" With me If Ur A "Star", Then Im a Galaxy Ill End Ur Life, And U Know I Mean This Ur Boi Got More "Shells" than Addidas Hating One Me and Trying To Be Me Is A Lose-Lose Situation Ur Not Who U Say U R, Ur Like Eminem In His Videos, Impersonating U Play Video Games, Thats The Only Way u Know Bout "Action" U And Ur Girl Communicate, So U only Know Bout One Thing Im "Packing" Me And Rap Go Together Like Butter And Toast, Birds Of The Same Feather U and Getting Fried Go Together, Cuz U cant Have One Without The Other Post feedback on wat u think...no hating plz ...... http://community.rapverse.com/showt...37&page=1&pp=15 |
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07-28-05, 07:25 PM | #2 | |
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uppin this.................................
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07-28-05, 07:38 PM | #3 | |
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uppin..................positive feedback..........
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07-28-05, 07:57 PM | #4 | |
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uppin...........................
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07-28-05, 08:16 PM | #5 | |
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uppin.........................
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07-29-05, 12:54 PM | #7 | |
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thx....uppin...............
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07-29-05, 12:58 PM | #8 | ||
GeNeRaL
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not bad but work on your structure and some words didnt rhyme but ok
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07-29-05, 01:06 PM | #9 | |
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aiight................uppin...............
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07-29-05, 01:18 PM | #10 | |
Middle Weight
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202138
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my link(http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202138) drop a line or critique
Live double cats give me trouble annoy my styles with Toys and smiles but don’t bother to call talked over swift With my father and all so I feel larger and tall owning a gift WTF street shoot outs, selling too much rifles which leads to Such trifles as drive bys hope this kind of jive dies god we need you If you take money then you’re a fake dummy if you don’t payback Stay whack looking for a hand out all understand what you about just a stray act Last edited by MADDRAPPER : 07-29-05 at 01:21 PM. Reason: add link |
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07-29-05, 01:22 PM | #11 | ||
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lol.................................. |
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07-29-05, 01:27 PM | #12 | ||
+...Femin-iLL...+
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Ur Boi Got More "Shells" than Addidas
^lol....iight, i see yu for a keystyle...this was pretty clean...slick punches throughout...good job...I wanna see some more from yu....
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07-29-05, 04:12 PM | #13 | |
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^thx man.......uppin this......
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07-29-05, 06:28 PM | #14 | ||
Cuz I'm Old Skool Baby
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yeah dis was ok for a quick thing, u had some hot lines tho, like
If Ur A "Star", Then Im a Galaxy and Ur Boi Got More "Shells" than Addidas ^lol that 1 made me laugh, plus adidas shelltoes r my favourite shoe lol but yeah, keep droppin! RTF in either my open mic r battle. peace.
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07-29-05, 06:30 PM | #15 | |
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thx....uppin................................
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