Battle Rules:

6 - lines dont exceed
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
you check in and spit first
um ya...

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-14-04 at 08:48 PM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

upfront has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-04 08:18 PM.

D. Cepth Shun has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-04 08:23 PM.

ayo...

when i asked if ya mom had an occupation blow jobs didnt count/
but i guess u were distracted cuz she was given my dick mouth to mouth/

listen up i throw empty shells at ya head like ammunition/
got u in a state of mind where u mus b put in submission/

poetically devine from ya ass u jus cant compare/
ask me to spit six bars in 20 minutes u better beware/
cuz i touch down wit s0o much heat it leaves ya ass in dispair/
nigga u think u run dis site i been sent to tell u im in tha captains chair da bullets dat hit ya head i collected and became a billionaire///////

~peace~

Always upfront, that’s true, you the first in line to get beat.
Watch him try to post his verse, and get 6 lines incomplete!
And after your silly words, it’s true ya gonna leave me behind.
Cause I’ll be laughing my ass off at all the lines you designed.
Upfront is a fucking retard, brain's dimmer than a broken lamp.
And didn’t go to the military, was forced to stay in boot camp!

if you don't get it, don't vote!

look i aint gonna vote on one of my homies but c depth was harder...

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upping fasho..........................

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War|Pestilence|
Death|Famine|

|Atrocious|
|Corruptive|Depraved|
|Heinous|Malevolent|Sinister|

That's pretty fucking evil to me.....

uppin less get it ovaaaaaaaa

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upping please vote here

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War|Pestilence|
Death|Famine|

|Atrocious|
|Corruptive|Depraved|
|Heinous|Malevolent|Sinister|

That's pretty fucking evil to me.....

checkin it out

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Guess who?...

...Paramik Fuckin'...

...Owns You!

uppin

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upping please vote here

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War|Pestilence|
Death|Famine|

|Atrocious|
|Corruptive|Depraved|
|Heinous|Malevolent|Sinister|

That's pretty fucking evil to me.....

Voted For: D. Cepth Shun

up- nah i dont like the bad structure/rhyme scheme and played punches. try to use more personals, peep the tutorials and look at some verses from vets.....3/10
d cept- ehh the punches was coo, not the shit but coo. structure was mad good, wordplay was there overall a pretty decent verse .....6/10

return the favor...links in the sig

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Soundclick

btw...the wink was cuz i know who you are....not very slick partnr.....lmao!

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Soundclick