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Old 07-18-05, 09:08 AM   #1
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E.C (2-3) Vs. Stanza (3-4)

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Topic: The waters Reflection
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Old 07-18-05, 06:28 PM   #2
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Old 07-18-05, 06:34 PM   #3
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Old 07-21-05, 05:48 PM   #4
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The Waters Reflections

In These Waters I Think I See
Another Dead Nigga Lookin At me
Maybe In These Waters I See
A Life That Useless From Weed

In These Waters Lies A Poor Reflection
Of a Man Thats Tired of 5-0 Detections
In These Waters Lies Just Another Face
Of a Man Thats Lost In Life and in Place

In The Waters Reflection My Troubles Rest
or shall I say my Worries At There Best
Worries of Dying from a Bullet To The Chest
Livin Life In The Present Full Of Regrets

In These Waters I Know That I Saw
a Young Man Thats Runnin From The Law

In These Waters Lie The pain And tears
But In The Waters I Wish to See....A Young Man who Lives Who he Is


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Old 07-21-05, 07:16 PM   #5
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as i stop and stare to look at at the features of the ocean,
i can almost see a face, covered in ripples from the motions,
the trees glisen, like a mirror image there almost the same,
i put a stick and pierce the calm water to write my name,
so quiet, swifts of wind draft and the sounds of water rushing,
it skims the sea with a gust of air like my finger tips touching,
i splash............. and the water trickles down my damp face,
so liveley yet motionless, there's no chance of being traced,
my mind wonders to the horizon where i can stare at the sun,
and my eyes screw up but i can see my journey has just begun,


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Old 07-21-05, 07:45 PM   #6
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V. EC, the other dudes was longer, but it just didnt have the content i was hoping.. I think EC had a better plot / story like, although it was more of a take, not much of a story was developed too well in either of your verses, i mean, thats a stupid attempt to be abstract, and it doesnt work when you dont even tie that it all means together at the end, but my vote stands.

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Old 07-22-05, 01:19 PM   #7
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kinda both short from the both of yall nah really showin alota stuff but its aight....Stanza..u did good had the ok vocab and structure was good really kinda simple in ur verse didnt show creativivty but u had a strucutre and an aight emotion in ur verse so made it an aight verse...E.C ur was short and really not that good u can do way better but u had the emotion and more strucuture and flow on it and showed more creativivty due to tha lines were more stretched out showin more vocab at the same time....v/ this is kinda tuff cuz both did an aight job yall can do better wit more lines but my v/ is gonna go to E.C cuz jus had a better structure and a better vocabulary though stanza had a better emotion on it e.c won cuz of the rest of it.....so good jb to the both of ya... and all did an aight job bu next time try to amke he lines longer it jus seems interestin that way....v/ E.C
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Old 07-22-05, 01:32 PM   #8
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ahh yes, i just read the rules.

heres my link-
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200606
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Old 07-25-05, 08:50 AM   #9
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E.C wins 2-0


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