I didnt finish with dubbin and mixin but im gettin tired so im decidin to post this now

This is the complete version of that sample song..... pretty complex song.... so listen closely

werd, i want mostly feed on the hook....

http://www.soundclick.com/olascripts

and i left feed on to of CHO's disses and LE and Trips joint... peep this

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

im feelin the loveeeeeeeeeee

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

listening:
beat is ill, love the flow,been a long time i didnt listen to you, you fucking elevated, pretty dope man, hook is pretty good man, who made the beat? id do a double voice on the hook so it could be more a hook, second verse is better, flow is incredible, lyrics are pretty dope, emotions are pretty cool, overall this should be song of the month

=Speats-=

^^ thanx speats......

so im gettin like 16 views per post...... thats nice, but can i get some damn feed

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

thanx........ i returned the favor

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

beat is awesome, sounds like some Shadowville shit, awesome flow man, good work...

lyrics is aiight, could some work here and there, but overall, dope joint

Fux is raw....... so very raw

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im just not liking it mate, soz. im not gunna go into why i dont like it cos u might get a bit moody or summit like other people on this site, it was ok tho and the delivery and quality was good just didnt like the lyrics bruv

word, i liked the beat....good lyrics, some were dope, i like the fish in a barrel with a shotgun one, my favourite....hook was cool, i thought all the lyrics were well done, if you touch up on this, it would be really dope, nice job man, like the first part of the hook, actually *listening to it right now*.....well, all i can say is, good job man, i enjoy your audios....if you want, you can rtf or something

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listning...........

beatz nice...........

voice werks nice on this.........

flow is illy................

delieverys nice.............

lyrics r fukking sikk...........

hookz is illy

second verse.......................

flows still on..................

"40 thousand leagues aint as deep as me" fukkin dopeness

sikk track fux
overall this was a 9/10.............................
rtf on my new joint com on girl
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