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3 | 37.50% |
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5 | 62.50% |
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10-19-05, 12:05 AM
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#91
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Sin`cere, if you pm strobe you can just take the win.
Strobe will close the battle, as it has been open for over 3 weeks and give you the win. However, if Paranoid requests to have it reopened after that, he'll only have 3 weeks to get the win or strobe will reclose permantely. Just pm, yo. This shit has been open forever. |
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10-21-05, 07:59 AM
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Voted For: Paranoid
This was a really close battle, it's quit hard to pick the better verse as both had some really strong points. Paranoid ~ come well dope on this I felt that his flow and vocab was well on top. His verse painted a clear picture of what was going on in his story, then imagery was sic. Sin ~ Come well dope as well, I felt that his verse was a little bit more complex then Paranoid, flow was nice and his imagery was nice, I like the way the verse ended where it started. All in all I felt that Paranoid's verse was the stronger, no hate to Sin his verse was sic as well but I felt that Para come just that little bit sic-er,.... Vote Para Stay up both 1~ |
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10-21-05, 08:59 AM
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#93
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IP: 2372 BC06
fuck you Mimesis now it can't get closed it's tie now, so Sin`Cere can't.
uppin for more voters. 2 more left.
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10-21-05, 10:00 AM
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Voted For: Paranoid
ok here's my breakdown... flow: paranoid has this subject IMO his bar layout was much better organised than Sinceres and evenly spread. Sin had a good flow to his verse but some lines were longer than others causing lines to drag on Imagery: again Para edged this IMO i could relate better to his topic than Sin's...the choice of 5 was a good thing to do because i felt it gave both ya a chance to experiment with different verses in ya own way and in this case, Para did better with his choice. Structure: Both had similar styles...paragraph breakdowns...so no-1 really edged this it was clear to read on both ends really. Topic...like imagery Para got this because like i said reading his verse i was feelin his topic more IMO particulary these bars He defended his attentions, as he pretended to play By loving his skill, to steal from the rich was his pay He’d look to destroy, so he’d always like in betrayal His brain messed up, and all he did was fight in denial Never was he loyal to reality, nor royal to mentality He scavenged for fame, by erupting his foil to fatality.. Eventually he figured, hesitation would grab him And he was correct, never to suspect it’d stab him ^ there were others too but these few were jus an example...Sin stayed on point but i wasn't as attached to his verse as i was Paras... All in all my vote goes to Paranoid...but good drops by both cats...Para can't RTF and i wouldn't expect Sin to so think of this as a free one 
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10-21-05, 10:16 PM
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thanks for the votes, y'all cna leave links if your gonna vote then, O well don't matter I appreciate that anyway.
uppin for 1 more..
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10-22-05, 05:09 PM
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This was feedback posted for Paranoid
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Nice battle you two, uppin' this piece... I can't vote so you fucks better do it justice!
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10-22-05, 05:19 PM
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Voted For: Paranoid
ok complexity both of you had it to an extent i feell both could have been a little better but sin ceres was jsut basic reall however i liked the style of writing he used with the recap flow both good not complaints really rhyme scheme much much beter that most of rv lol god damn pretty good but sin cere got this structure paranoid got but who gives a fuck really as long as it has complexity and flows its all good on a topical for me ok basically there were just soo many quotable lines in paranoids battle btu i didnt like his closing bar A thief, someone that fiends for them millions in life Never will that be, mentality controls the spy’s fight simple but good Then the government stepped in, saying he’d die a thief So the peasants asked another, is this lie just brief? His fear to appear, was only to determine wrong The ending to this fact of this annoying violin song i really liked this bar sincere has a few good lines too so props btu this was by far my favorite A bleeding pen on top of the desk with scared claws I suddenly paused…. Then I saw a black and red paw props to both of you one of the closest battles ive seen but i think ive seen better from both of you if you could rtf i will rtf again http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=210494 or any other cs battles thatnks
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