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Check Move Bitch.....

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This a 1st week Ko..0 and 1..So im guessin ya Lucks isnt Fuck Proof
No Possible way u can touch me..Like No ArmKidz in Duck Duck Goose
Actually ya Destination equals Elimination...Thats a Twist of ya Fate
U Can only Blow when u Reverse a P-89....Thats a Twist of ya Face
U talkin hood..U Not 50..if any ..Really..Ya Bodys not full of any Holes
u like an Injured David Beckham.Basically ya Lifes not full of any Goals
you remind me of a Disfigured writer....u got nuthin but Twiztid Plots
Mishandeling ya Mcgriddles....... only time u dropped anything Hotz
You destined to lose..Dont get Depressed.....Go head cry me a River
Ambient Linez resemble a Disfunctional Printer.....They Never Deliver

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time to shake off the rust i guess

OMG ur utter garbage... really b
how'd d'you expect to beat the best with a verse fulla similie's
that and a weak attempt at a personal.. ya verse is duller
losing is a hard game.... and one u pass with flying colors
ur disliked and despise and all ya verses are lame guy
all of rv hate you.... & that was BEFORE they kicked u from AI
let the blade mess up ya face, slice and carve
realise ur simp.son WITHOUT bart, homer, lisa and marge
here sinse july and still can't master the basics, dammit just leave
because that verse was a bigger joke then the fuckin multie league

Troop:

You had an alright verse, some good metas decent punches but nothing too great just mediocre stuff..

Best bar:

This a 1st week Ko..0 and 1..So im guessin ya Lucks isnt Fuck Proof
No Possible way u can touch me..Like No ArmKidz in Duck Duck Goose

best part of ya verse was the metas

overall: 6.5/10

amb:

Decent verse also.. a couple good metas and 1 dope punch. rest was average

best bar:

let the blade mess up ya face, slice and carve
realise ur simp.son WITHOUT bart, homer, lisa and marge

good meta there, nice punch a good personal and you came a bit better here with the punches.. not much better though.

overall: 7/10

vote: Amb

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RV's Only 3 Time Topical Tourney Champion

vote-jimmy pocketz

ambient good verse hommie but not consistant through out ya drop....punches were decent...personals were alright coulda done better like..whoa...structure was a lil bad at beginning then got into it....flow was good...multis were ok...closer was dope....

best lines:
here sinse july and still can't master the basics, dammit just leave
because that verse was a bigger joke then the fuckin multie league


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jimmy- hmm pretty tite opener not bad at all....flow was on point..punches were kinda good coulda done better...personals were good...multis were alright...structure was good....closer was deadly...werd


best lines:
you remind me of a Disfigured writer....u got nuthin but Twiztid Plots
Mishandeling ya Mcgriddles....... only time u dropped anything Hotz
You destined to lose..Dont get Depressed.....Go head cry me a River
Ambient Linez resemble a Disfunctional Printer.....They Never Deliver


v/jimmy pocketz

wow, ambient got this one, he came with some witty punches, the simpson line was nice, also i was definitely feeling the multi league line too....

Troop, your actually starting to get a grasp of basic punches, but they still arent hitting very hard yet... u had some forced rhymes and ur verse coulda read better...

so overall i give this one to ambient for wittier punches, and although structure wasnt real nice ur verse flowed nicely... V/Ambient..

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Vote - Ambient

here sinse july and still can't master the basics, dammit just leave
because that verse was a bigger joke then the fuckin multie league

^Had to say this was the best punch on your side Ambient your structure was kinda wack to me but everything else hit dead on good job

You destined to lose..Dont get Depressed.....Go head cry me a River
Ambient Linez resemble a Disfunctional Printer.....They Never Deliver

^This was Troop's best punchi think your verse was decent but a lot of more played punches and I really wasn't feeling that mcgriddle line but anyways your verse was decent i just think overall Ambeint's was better with his personals and punches...

if you think structure has anything do with a bad or good verse... then you are wack

Troop:

Like Ambient stated, ur verse was a bunch of similies and metas, with semi-punches at the end, but they dont land very hard at all....... the line i felt the most was:

U talkin hood..U Not 50..if any ..Really..Ya Bodys not full of any Holes
u like an Injured David Beckham.Basically ya Lifes not full of any Goals

..... decent verse, with the multiple end rhymes, but u arent really attacking ambient.... its just a basic diss, and they dont hit very hard besides that.

Ambient:

.. yea u were kinda rusty, structure was alil off in the opener, but u filled ur verse with metas, punches, and personals, unlike troop, who really only focused on metas.... ur best bar to me was:

let the blade mess up ya face, slice and carve
realise ur simp.son WITHOUT bart, homer, lisa and marge

by far, because most of the rest of ur verse was more simplistic, besides that and another bar... luckily for u, complexity is not the only indicator in a battle.... and for the nice personals and punches, U WIN

V/Ambient

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

Pocket

This a 1st week Ko..0 and 1..So im guessin ya Lucks isnt Fuck Proof
No Possible way u can touch me..Like No ArmKidz in Duck Duck Goose
played..
Actually ya Destination equals Elimination...Thats a Twist of ya Fate
U Can only Blow when u Reverse a P-89....Thats a Twist of ya Face
you repeated yaself
U talkin hood..U Not 50..if any ..Really..Ya Bodys not full of any Holes
u like an Injured David Beckham.Basically ya Lifes not full of any Goals
eh..
you remind me of a Disfigured writer....u got nuthin but Twiztid Plots
Mishandeling ya Mcgriddles....... only time u dropped anything Hotz
nope
You destined to lose..Dont get Depressed.....Go head cry me a River
Ambient Linez resemble a Disfunctional Printer.....They Never Deliver
weak


Ambient

OMG ur utter garbage... really b
how'd d'you expect to beat the best with a verse fulla similie's
nope
that and a weak attempt at a personal.. ya verse is duller
losing is a hard game.... and one u pass with flying colors
ok
ur disliked and despise and all ya verses are lame guy
all of rv hate you.... & that was BEFORE they kicked u from AI
nice
let the blade mess up ya face, slice and carve
realise ur simp.son WITHOUT bart, homer, lisa and marge
good
here sinse july and still can't master the basics, dammit just leave
because that verse was a bigger joke then the fuckin multie league
hahahahaha

Vote = Ambient

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OMG ur utter garbage... really b
how'd d'you expect to beat the best with a verse fulla similie's
good
that and a weak attempt at a personal.. ya verse is duller
losing is a hard game.... and one u pass with flying colors
no
ur disliked and despise and all ya verses are lame guy
all of rv hate you.... & that was BEFORE they kicked u from AI
nice
let the blade mess up ya face, slice and carve
realise ur simp.son WITHOUT bart, homer, lisa and marge
nah…
here sinse july and still can't master the basics, dammit just leave
because that verse was a bigger joke then the fuckin multie league
okay…

This a 1st week Ko..0 and 1..So im guessin ya Lucks isnt Fuck Proof
No Possible way u can touch me..Like No ArmKidz in Duck Duck Goose
hell no
Actually ya Destination equals Elimination...Thats a Twist of ya Fate
U Can only Blow when u Reverse a P-89....Thats a Twist of ya Face
okay…
U talkin hood..U Not 50..if any ..Really..Ya Bodys not full of any Holes
u like an Injured David Beckham.Basically ya Lifes not full of any Goals
nope
you remind me of a Disfigured writer....u got nuthin but Twiztid Plots
Mishandeling ya Mcgriddles....... only time u dropped anything Hotz
no…
You destined to lose..Dont get Depressed.....Go head cry me a River
Ambient Linez resemble a Disfunctional Printer.....They Never Deliver
decent

v/ Amb

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=182823
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