Battle Rules:

6 - 12 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 KO
Not closed by Augest 29 person with the most vote wins

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 08-05-05 at 02:43 PM

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Closed - Expired / old battle win

Pressence has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-05 02:44 PM.

Black Queen has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-05 02:44 PM.

Im in the damn Presence to just simply put you on the spot
By telling ya secret that you Macreep/Ktrini dont say you not *
Cause i'm a Soldier... and i get glad-with- haters(Gladiators) bars
They're just die knowin what's coming, like aliens from mars
Of course, you just want to battle me to get the hype again
And you dig up all your rhymes from otha sites like its a reyclin bin
And this guy said IPs mean shit cus i said him n Macreep IPs the same
This nerd got sprayed so much thats why he needed a new name
This herb finna get served fast so you be needing some help
So everybody should “Down grade your status to thug less!”
Nobody’s going to like you so please jus don’t even try dude
So why should I try fool, when you diss yourself more than I do

*click the link macreep n presense ips the same
ill rtf jus vote in the battle ''honestly''

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damn yo.....post ya verse already....no wonder you wanted so much time....

it's only 6 lines....

ooh.......................fake personals.......whackness at it's finest....congradulations black queen

*every applauds*

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Voted For: Pressence

i think pressence took this the amount of punches he threw at you jus killed you good concepts which pressence developed into puches good wordplay good flow lol good everything liked this battle very good

black queen-you should have done more personals and your punches didnt seem to hit like pressence's did ya know?well i liked ya flow and ya structure

press- you took this with all out punches and personals

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OYD MAFIA

^^^lol i had a lot of personals didnt read the verse through but w/e 1-0

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Voted For: Pressence

Black Queen
Im in the damn Presence to just simply put you on the spot
By telling ya secret that you Macreep/Ktrini dont say you not *
^^ an ok personal..worded poorly
Cause i'm a Soldier... and i get glad-with- haters(Gladiators) bars
They're just die knowin what's coming, like aliens from mars
^^ennh not exactly a punch..worded bad
Of course, you just want to battle me to get the hype again
And you dig up all your rhymes from otha sites like its a reyclin bin
^^lol pretty good but not really flowin that good
And this guy said IPs mean shit cus i said him n Macreep IPs the same
This nerd got sprayed so much thats why he needed a new name
^^umm dont flow well
This herb finna get served fast so you be needing some help
So everybody should “Down grade your status to thug less!”
^^no rhyme scheme, really bad
Nobody’s going to like you so please jus don’t even try dude
So why should I try fool, when you diss yourself more than I do
^^lol, pretty nice

overall: 6.5/10.. pretty good verse, u coulda used multies more though. Also u have to diss him more dont just use the IP thing cuz it gets boring. Also work on ur wording cuz it seems to long when read. Good verse.

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Pressence
dying for some sex,like your whole life is comprised of some ghost-kisses
cause all she be does is cum-plane bout it,like some horny air hostesses
^^ lmao nice man
disrespected,cause ya Open Mics SUCK!,they all either,strayed-or-neglected
She got Game in her sig,just goes to show she gets played-and-rejected
^^good flow good punch lol
trying ta sell your soul,but nobody wanted to buy it,and u in a hot-drought
your rhymes are bout as this-hired(desired)as poor college drop-outs
^^wordplay was forced, ok punch
all over you plan on bitchin and bitchin,like it's your sole niche-and-it's-zigs
I'll slap you and have you covering half ya face like the bitch-in-ya-sig.
^^lmao nice cuz that her in the sig
she thinks I'm macreep based on Ip's,so now she feel special like a scholar
cause she lackes sense(cents) like some rich people obsessed with dollars
^^dont make sense really...
buring herself up in a garden after swallowin seeds,is how she'd grow
cause her skill will never tie(thigh),with mines,like some legless hoes
^^umm ok wordplay forced again

overall:7.5/10... u had some forced wordplay but u made up for it in most of ur punches. u had great flow and I liked ur inner multies. Really the only bad thing is wording and wordplay, both of u seem to have that problem. Great Verse man.

V/Pressence for better punches and flow, I recommend u both keeo writing lol, and that u guys work on ur wording and wordplay, cuz P some of ur stuff was forced which is really bad.... Please vote on my battles in my sig..thanks-PEACE

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^^^^Good vote.....will keep feedback in mind.....ooh...and i'll return favor.....

Checking this out...Even though there's arent any naked pictures...

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