Battle Rules:

6 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 01-23-05 at 05:37 PM

Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in.

dOpEbOi 210 has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-23-05 03:38 PM.

Ebonicz has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-23-05 03:44 PM.

u ready mayn????????????????????????????????????????

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me vs. L~S...i think he cheated tho so check wut i posted b4 u read tha posts... StAcKiN Gs 'n LiGhTiN dat pUrPlE

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nigga think he witty wit a name like ebonicz
but u couldnt spit intelligent if u was hookd on phonix
he mighta won 1 more battle..but shit,dats irrelevant
rememba this loss wen u got grand children, so ull b able to tell-of-it
nigga get no play but his excuse is celibacy
im more hardcore den bondage porn..so watch how u comin-at-me
cuz my rhymes is grade A...n at best yours is a C
u couldnt b a gangsta even if yo initials was O-G
dis'll b tha last time ull eva wanna get ina battle wit me...





celibacy-not wanting to ingage in sexual intercourse or relations

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me vs. L~S...i think he cheated tho so check wut i posted b4 u read tha posts... StAcKiN Gs 'n LiGhTiN dat pUrPlE

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i actually meant to put "cuz my rhymes is grade A...n at best yours is a D

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me vs. L~S...i think he cheated tho so check wut i posted b4 u read tha posts... StAcKiN Gs 'n LiGhTiN dat pUrPlE

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now you should face it.. when you spit you better pace it
cuz when i take it to tha basics i start to race it
now youll slowly in take my verbal abusion
you hear it in ya dream you feel intursion
but my verse just haunts.. you my style taunts..
you..you think this is a jaunt.. you know you chances are gaunt
so dope boi . do you have any hope or joy.
well in one battle i crush that my scopes no toy
ill snipe you out in a blink of an eye you dream gone
so don't act hard don't act intence you aint extream son
i would maybe say im scared of you but i aint got homophobia
i know it ova when i a battle a chump wit ebonaphobia

if you don't know what gaunt or jaunt mean look it up

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uppin fa votes fa real mayn....please...this suppose 2 b a battle between us n nigga spit tha whole thing bout him...like mayb 2 disses...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !

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me vs. L~S...i think he cheated tho so check wut i posted b4 u read tha posts... StAcKiN Gs 'n LiGhTiN dat pUrPlE

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well in one battle i'll crush u... my scopes no toy ****** that what i ment guese i should pick up phoniex

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uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!

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me vs. L~S...i think he cheated tho so check wut i posted b4 u read tha posts... StAcKiN Gs 'n LiGhTiN dat pUrPlE

open mic

Voted For: dOpEbOi 210

HAVE TO GO WITH dope he did not have two lines rhyming again, I liked his flow his personels where ok but both need to work on it iight. and the opener-closure goes to him and the rhyming and the multis and the vocab a lil this is what helped him!

nigga think he witty wit a name like ebonicz
but u couldnt spit intelligent if u was hookd on phonix
he mighta won 1 more battle..but shit,dats irrelevant
rememba this loss wen u got grand children, so ull b able to tell-of-it
nigga get no play but his excuse is celibacy
im more hardcore den bondage porn..so watch how u comin-at-me
5/10
rt the fav in my links

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Voted For: Ebonicz

wow ebonics took dis battle Dopes verse was boring man i didnt even get 2 finish man he was jus rhymin n rhyming ebonics had betta punches n betta flow as well as betta structure Return da favor iight peace

Voted For: dOpEbOi 210

Both ya verses was simple
yall had basic rhymes
so i'll break it down like dis
punches=dope boi
flow= ebonicz
meta=N/A
structure=dope boi
dope boi verse= 3/5
ebonicz= 2/5
keep elavatin pplz

return da fav...

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ALL On A BitcH

Voted For: dOpEbOi 210

this was a close one..not all that good, but i feel dope boi took it. his punches were better. all tho he worded them kinda poorly, i think he came harder in this. not really too many personals in this battle that couldve geared towards one person. but alot of wordplay in this that i was feelin from dope boi. i think u got potential, i just think u should elevate a lot...ur flows are nice, but ur missing something, and it dont all tie together to me...but i liked it...
ebonics-good drop. but i think ur structure was bad. i think some of ur lines werent complete,and then some of em was stretched, so that was not coo...ur puncehs werent that hard either...i was feelin ur wordplay a lil, but i also think u should elavate alot...yall got potential to be dope, but i think yall missin soemthing.
overall-i think yall should elevate,. this one was close, but not al ot of dopeness in this one...NO HATE, just elevate a lil. next time, focus on ur punches.

plz RTF on battle against cj...CAUSE I took tha time to vote on this...NO HATE, just plz RTF...good battle, and elevate...

v/dope boi






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