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03-08-06, 05:26 PM
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Have You Ever...New Song For The New Album...
IP: 9C2B 06EC
this is the first cut of this song....so be harsh on it....i want as much feedback as possible cuz ive prolly gotta change it alot before its album worthy....so as much help as possible please....
Have You Ever - http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3609296 links - http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223668 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223812 thanks
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03-09-06, 11:36 AM
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I don't lose
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IP: 9C2B 06EC
comon just a lil feed?
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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03-11-06, 03:09 PM
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On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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IP: BACC 8E92
Alrigh i'm peepin now
hmmmm i have no idea why you were hatin on spul and tizz.....cuz there song sounds way better then this song does....ur flows on point but you have no emotion of delivery..sounds really boring..up that..beats played out....this song aint album worthy sorry cuz....up a lil more |
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03-11-06, 03:44 PM
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IP: 2029 97B3
beat:i luv beatz like dis........9
flow:man...i luv ya flowz man......dey on point......8.5...just b a little louder and up ya emotion.... hook:lackin a hook but i guess da sample makez up for it and itz still hot....8.5 enjoyment:9...i like dis joint mah dude.....real talk... |
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03-11-06, 03:58 PM
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Champion
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IP: 95F7 5794
Man I dont know why you give out so much hate when this aint even average but its better than most newbs, you have a natural flow but thats just it...work on the delivery and presence, and emotion, youre flows too robotic IMo..there u go
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03-11-06, 04:08 PM
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New to RV
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IP: 6DEB 4429
yea I'm definately feelin this beat...even tho samples are startin to sound the same now...but its all good tho..ya flow was on point, delivery couldve been alot better tho, couldve had more emotion to make ya lyrics more interesting...Ya vocal volume could be higher too...overall this track was ok.
Can you RTF please thanks http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=223857 |
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03-11-06, 06:33 PM
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IP: 9C2B 06EC
first off....i dont "hate" on those people...i just give feed on what they need to work on....i know i dont have it all down, n i dont claim too... i know i need to work on bunch of shit hence why i put shit up on here to get feedback on what needs to be worked on
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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