Ok, before i write it, i know yall used 2 me rappin, and im still stayin in, but ive been expanding my horizon l8ly and gittin in2 other kinds of writting. theres a arts contest at my skool accepting artwork (painting, drawings, etc.) and written works (short stories or poems). so i wrote a poem. its called My Everything. its about my bf, my love, my life, my future. well, here it goes. hope u like.

I can feel the shadows passing over me
I get lost in the darkness, i dont know where i am
Am i even alive?
I cant tell if im breathing
Is it all a dream?
I feel my heart and soul being swallowed into nothing
Slipping away
Slowly drifting
But then u come and save me
You take my hand and lift me up
U hold on2 my every waking moment
Not letting go
Never letting go
Everything was lost, i had nothing
But no i have u and its all i need
U rescued me
Grasping my life in the palm of ur hand
Keeping me as urs
Where ill b safe
No harm can come of me
U will stand by my side
Hold me
Never letting go
Please never let go
My love, my prince, my darling
My everything
Never let go

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DeTiCaTeD To A TrUe LyRiCiSt

hahaha at that joke of a "tru" rappa in ya sig...but ne wayz....tha poem wasnt too bad...

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me vs. L~S...i think he cheated tho so check wut i posted b4 u read tha posts... StAcKiN Gs 'n LiGhTiN dat pUrPlE

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o, and ha ha 2 u usin aaron carter in ur avy.

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this was good girl, nice imagery and vocab, from the heart, thats what i like to see,instead of forced meaningless shit, nice job

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