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View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
A-Sez | 5 | 71.43% | |
Law_Jr | 2 | 28.57% | |
Voters: 7. You may not vote on this poll |
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08-06-05, 06:18 PM | #1 | |
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A-Sez vs Law_Jr
IP: A1FA 2EF0
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting You drop your verse first Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-09-05 at 06:18 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
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08-06-05, 06:19 PM | #2 | |
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IP: A1FA 2EF0
Law_Jr has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-05 06:19 PM.
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08-06-05, 08:10 PM | #3 | |
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IP: A1FA 2EF0
This kid doesen't kno who tha fuck he's battlin/\Newsflash dawg your not an emcee your style is generic
Shoot off Wit only one clip and already his head's rattlin/\Have this nigga vommitin because i flow toxic This niggaz on kool kol-b's dick he needz 2 be eraticated/\Dude givin out dumb-ass votes he's fuckin eerie Kool kol-b in Member Mugshots wasn't the first time he masturebated/\Cuz like faggots at at a bitch party he always says Fuck Puss-c When this cat thinks of kool kol-b he gets a bizzy-bone-r/\Cant even compare his shit to bone thugz n harmony U can tell he's always at home jackin off he's a fuckin loner/\Ha fah this guy battlin me is intolerable cruelty
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08-06-05, 11:57 PM | #4 | |
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IP: B525 44D9
A-Sez has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-05 11:57 PM.
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08-06-05, 11:58 PM | #5 | ||
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IP: B525 44D9
this kid bends over fo tha fellas n he takes it raw
i dont need 2 commit a crime, but ima break tha law i dont even gotta use good rymes, cuz ur shit is wack as hell Quote:
yeah, it means i just put this pussy 2 sleep myself* c wut im sayin? my lyrics kill u, ur about 2 die ima school this kid. battle me? wut is Jr.? high?** * vets = vetranarian, pussy = cat, ahh, u know wut the fuck i mean ** SCHOOL this kid, Jr.? high? = Junior High
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08-08-05, 09:10 PM | #6 | |
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IP: B525 44D9
uppin............................................. .......
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08-08-05, 09:40 PM | #7 |
Coming to Kill you All
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IP: E857 3DA5
Voted For: A-Sez
This kid doesen't kno who tha fuck he's battlin/\Newsflash dawg your not an emcee your style is generic Shoot off Wit only one clip and already his head's rattlin/\Have this nigga vommitin because i flow toxic ^^Umm..I assume this is a bar?...but there's no punch This niggaz on kool kol-b's dick he needz 2 be eraticated/\Dude givin out dumb-ass votes he's fuckin eerie Kool kol-b in Member Mugshots wasn't the first time he masturebated/\Cuz like faggots at at a bitch party he always says Fuck Puss-c ^^well...you had a good concept on Kool-B...but where was proof...or is it a fake personal on him d/r'n.? When this cat thinks of kool kol-b he gets a bizzy-bone-r/\Cant even compare his shit to bone thugz n harmony U can tell he's always at home jackin off he's a fuckin loner/\Ha fah this guy battlin me is intolerable cruelty ^^your just all over the place.... OK...your structure sucks.Just being honest....here.What I think you need is to write you verses normally.not with the ^ shit.And you just seemed to be all over the place.A half of a line spoke about him and Kool-col..and then the other half was about voting...word your shit up and fix structure. this kid bends over fo tha fellas n he takes it raw i dont need 2 commit a crime, but ima break tha law ^^played..every battle with Law has to have something like this? i dont even gotta use good rymes, cuz ur shit is wack as hell Quote: Originally Posted by Law_Jr damn yall niggaz know what no vets means yeah, it means i just put this pussy 2 sleep myself* ^^No punch..... c wut im sayin? my lyrics kill u, ur about 2 die ima school this kid. battle me? wut is Jr.? high?** ^^OK..best line in this bar Ok...you had a better structure and flow.And wasn't all over the place like LAw.But your punches were weak.1st bar about breakin law has been used against law jr in every single battle he's been in.2nd bar was nothing.3rd was the best. Vote-A-SEZ RTF BELOW PLEASE http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203195 |
08-08-05, 10:04 PM | #8 | ||||
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IP: 5BF6 8343
my bad forgot to quote proof
battle kool col-b vs puss-c this was a vote for kool Quote:
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from what are you listening to thread Quote:
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08-08-05, 10:04 PM | #9 | ||||
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IP: 5BF6 8343
my bad forgot to quote proof
battle kool col-b vs puss-c this was a vote for kool Quote:
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from what are you listening to thread Quote:
please revise vote........
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08-08-05, 10:40 PM | #10 | |||
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IP: B525 44D9
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^^that was feed back not a vote
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08-08-05, 10:41 PM | #11 | |||
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^^that was feed back not a vote
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08-08-05, 10:42 PM | #12 |
Coming to Kill you All
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IP: E857 3DA5
Law....it's too late now to post proof...the voters wouldn't be able to see it.....
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08-09-05, 01:17 AM | #13 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 28AD 5545
Voted For: Law_Jr
V/law_Jr LAW had better disses better multis better vocab man a-sez just cuz in ur mind u think u good dont mean u only gutta put 3 whack lines no hate just stating my opinion law ur shit was fresh nothing played.....a-sez ur shit was shit nothing at all man no hate.........RTF OR THIS VOTE WILL BE DISQUALIFIED Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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08-09-05, 07:35 PM | #14 | |
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IP: B525 44D9
uppin............................................. .................................................. ..
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08-09-05, 08:50 PM | #15 | |
got u all confused n shit
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IP: 104C 51B3
Voted For: A-Sez
wow this was hella one sided fam..Sez...good drp man yo shit was hot...last line that shit had me rolling... Law homnie work on ya structure fam it's fucked horribly.....i did'nt even finish tha verse becuz i culd'nt.... but anywho my vote goes to A-Sez rtf in my sig or i will get this vote removed fam..i mean it Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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