Kam-K: 'Deranged'


Tommy grew up yo to home on the range
to tommy bein homeless never really seemed to strange
he used to hustle in city, by 4th avenue block
the only thing he knew was how gain weight with some rocks
but he keept his glock cocked, straight up he hated his place
and everybody looked on, knew his life was a disgrace
but tommy pushed on, figured this was his life order
and if anything went wrong, hes flyin straight across the border
but shit fell apart, as most shit tends to do
tommys sellin to a undercover, what the fucks he supposed to do
so tosses his shit, runnin so he ain't caught
but in a minute the only thing he'll here is the sound of shots
and the bystanders said that it that was tommy's fault
and now hes bein burned up to join the soil and the salt

its deranged
motherfucker its deranged

now ricky 'ray' ricardo had a love for cocaine
chillen on the corner, it was his favorite thing to slang
but drug dealin is something thatll get ya up in a mix
hangin with the wrong crowd, will end you up in a fix
so one day ricky ray decides to skimp the wrong man
and in a week he ends up in the back of a black van
and he wonders to him self how it happen so fast
they came out, and clocked his ass, it happen so fast
but the hard way seemed to be destine for ricky
he slowly realizes his situation is gettin very sticky
and when the van pulls to a stop he feels his heart drop
its dark at the top of hill behind the old auto shop
as they pulled him out ray gets a glimpse of the bat
it only took a few whacks, to break his fucking knee caps
and those motherfuckers didn't even notice he was'nt dead
they shouldve seen his eyes were open when they bashed in his head
this the kind of shit thatll happen in the game
you cant be scared motherfucker, itll drive you insane,
it's deranged

ummmmmmmm i hate it man that was really really bad

not to good i go with 4/10 u need to get some posts and get some wins and first of all go to tutorials and learn how to flow and make multis and shyt.....

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wack wack wack ^^ listen to him cuz dat nigga can spit
try again stay up

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beezy crew fo life
1 love live life
2 the fullest

HOLLA @YA GIRL

beezy crew from life to death
n when I die put the colors across my chest

sound like some everclear shit
but i guess its clever for a bitch
just playin yo, dont take it personal
just sayin shit, cause im implacable

yea i mean no disrespect kid i liked the story but the way u did it wasnt to good ya kno so jus work on it and keep elvation iight.....

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