Battle Rules:

8 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-04-05 at 07:09 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

immortality has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-04-05 06:40 PM.

lil jj_1 has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-04-05 06:48 PM.

lil jj is terrible, your raps is unbearable, so just stop
your carreer exploding, ha, that'd only happen if your cherry *popped*
cuz your a *pussy*, and couldnt push me, if i was weed
trying to diss me on the mic, but bitch you cant even reed (1)
please, immortality, had this won from the get go
pissing into a camp fire, is the only time you own, flaming flows
a zero on the scale is wut you get, everytime, your J.ust J.udged
closest youve been to *robbery*, is your morning coffee *mugs*
couldnt notice hot *shit*, if it fell into your *pants*
shouldve quit this site when you had the god given chance

1. a mic is considered an instrument and it uses thwe "wind" from your mouth, and alot of "woodwind" instruments use reeds..even though mics arent considered woodwinds, its still nice werdplay

freestyle battle...WOMP, Womp, womp!!!!!!!

ey yo u no i aint scared and if i was, i wouldnt denie it/
cause im the one round here,and i supply it/
and wat im doin u caint do nuttin about it and u caint stop it/
so da best thing u can do is sit back and watch it/
spread through erbody like a virus in they veins/
yea u got some skill boy but the only thing missin is ya brains/
dis is a freestyle boy,so u no i post it quickly/
yo ass gon so fast, u da one sayin u miss me/
bitch please, u aint gon nuttin on dis verse/
u juss hatin cause god bless me wit dis beautiful curse/

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Voted For: immortality

this was very simple......even though neither of u had good structer....immortily had better flow and rhyme scheme and punches and mulies really just one sided hear.....lil jj u got up your skill dued u need to elevate go check out some vet battles and learn how to make a good punch cause u really had nothing here fam....no hate tho....~1~


v/immortaly

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^ko0, ko0......uppin, uppin, this this, bizatch, bizatch, nice job homei, just keep elevating and youll get there.....1

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checkin the pollz, this shit lookz one sided the whole way, but i dont feel like voting, lol, im a lazy ass, but werd, I.M. shood get this in a KO.....not a good battle in my eyes, but elevate jj, and eventually your freee skillz will get there

uppin fo votes on dis bizatch....werd..............

uppin.............................................

uppin bitches.....................................

Voted For: immortality

i red the first two lines of immortality and i had to vote him that shit had me rowllin plus his mults sick workd play sick struster deffently sick


the other cat naw elvate you tryed to many punches that where barly punches no mults struster was iight no word play that shit was not that good u need to evlat

for immortalyed keep rappin like that and im have to step to u

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ill verbaly is my real rap name that or ill vivid if you dont get it then you illitrate these are the battle im currtly in vote and all do the same halla 1.


my open mic as of now check it rate it late
my thoughts
last nights happing

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uppin.........