Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Due Oct. 20th (5 days from now)

gud lucc UNF

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-18-05 at 06:25 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

-U.N.F- has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-15-05 06:27 PM.

Transkriptz has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-15-05 06:30 PM.

www.soundclick.com/unf

The Lyrics Are:

Lyrical Armageddon,All Up In Ya Mug
Blade To Ya Throat,Wesley Suckin ya Blood
Transkripts You A Bitch,A Whack Hu Dont Fuck
Hes Afraid Of Pussy So All He Do Is Suck
Wanna Be A Gay Role Model? Aint No Other
Cause All That Faggot Shit Must Come From Ya Mother
An You Think You Hood?Shit What Will Come Next
Cause College Is the Only Time You In The Projects(Ha Ha)
Kevin?Damb Even Your Name Is Gay
Shit,It's Like You A Rentboy In A Sex Shop Display
Transcript? You The Definition Of A Copy
An Even If You Dont Bite Ya Shit's Still Sloppy
Am Dealin You Fire,Cant Compete lyrically
I Got This Shit "Locked"Like A Penetetary
Im A Spit First Cause Bitch You Scared
An Punch You In The Face Leave Ya Vision Impared
Your Audio Rec's 1-1 From Your No-Shows
Ima Make it 1-2 Cause You Got Them Broken Flows
Transkiptz 5-0?Hell Nah Ima Murk Ya
So Change The Prediction Around So Shits Vice Versa

Song Called Rv Battle VS Transkriptz

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"LETS GET IT"

My lyrics will put you to shame
They call you UN, but i know a girl with that name//

And dude your garbage, fag I'll say it openly
Talking alot of shit, then he's gonna vote for me//

Kinda sad yes son i gotta admit it
Even if rap was a girl you couldn't even hit it//

Im a real soldier, i bring camoflauge to wars
But UNF broke the custom, he came in a bra//

No point in going on, but I dont want to stop
Cuz he gave me the victory before i even dropped//

No ones really gonna give a fuck tll i fuck up this fuck
Cause UNFs told me he really needed his cock sucked//

Ok no more chitter chatter and let us get down to business
"No not that way" you fag i'll rip you in minutes//

Heres the total proof that un's a little dick
the only way he cuts people off is when he uses schick//

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Voted For: -U.N.F-

transkriptz-
not feelin this, vocals r too soft n the disses r repetitive. how many times do u need to call him a girl?
n wut the fuck is "No ones really gonna give a fuck tll i fuck up this fuck"
n some of the rhymes (war/bra) i wudve given u in a text battle, but u need 2 make them rhyme when u rap them

unf- lol @ "Battle Vs Ma Boi Transkriptz On RV-" n "Transkripts You A Bitch,A Whack Hu Dont Fuck
Hes Afraid Of Pussy So All He Do Is Suck"
neways, u had more presence here, n ur lyrics were way better

rtf to one of the links in my sig

Voted For: -U.N.F-

ma vote goes to -UNF-
He had a better flow
also punches hit much harder
nice use of personals
no personals used


Transkriptz
flow was alil off
punches was weak

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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i meant no personals was used from Transkriptz

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Alright thanks for the feedback and gonna work on what i need to.

I think you took dis one UNF but good battle

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Yuh Good Battle.....Upping................................. ...........

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OYD MAFIA

Voted For: -U.N.F-

Honestly Trans...not feelin this ya voice isn't anywhere near cut out for this beat + it's crunk and personally this type of beat is ish for a battle...too commercial...flow is also an area that needs work on you fall off and really aren't on beat for most of the track either...emotion isn't good either it sounds like your scared of the mic...

Trans i don't think audio battling is your thing at the moment for certain reasons 1 you need to develop your own style coz your verse was very plain and your brand new to audio i can tell (your account ain't been properly registered yet lol) 2 ya voice isn't that of a battle rappers it lacks the emotion at the moment to suceed in this area & 3 ya production on the trackwas also something that needs attention to as well...many pops in that verse which hindered it quite badly IMO...but like i said ya new and you should find your feet soon if you wanna venture in rap further...don't let this feedback put you down i'm only pointing out sections that need work on...all you gotta do is prove me wrong

UNF...voice sounds like you puttin a deeper voice on lol...flows a lil better punches are played...beat is hella basic...some personals thrown in there...delivery is ok but emotion is forced due to the sound of ya vocals...lol beat sounds a lil like an eminem 1st time at producing type beat lol...you won...but only due to experience...against someone else you'd get merked easy wit a verse like this IMO...coz improvement is also needed on your part...

but V/UNF...RTF in my sig (E.C)

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Voted For: -U.N.F-

ok unf...

ite emoption is ite... your voice aint good your puttin a deep voice on coz it usually sounds pretty squeaky... punches aint dat good really... they are ok but you need some work on em... flow slips a few times.. overall not a bad diss..

transkriptz

the beat is looowww i can heardly hear it lol... beat aint that good.... rofl you sound younger than unf... emotion is lacking you need to sound angry n shit... flow ias ok... quality is meh lots of poppin n shit... delivery is wack... not really feelin this man sorry your punches were better than unf's you had some ite lines in there but if u cant spit em then there not going to be very effective

both of you work on your emotion and punches...

v/ unf

flow and emotion was better... punches wern't as good they were iite but the other guy wasn't good at all really

RTF on my battle with mad dog within 2 days or this vote will be removed*** link is in the sig

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E.C- Untitled

aight thx...gonna rtf soon hol up........................

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OYD MAFIA

rofl hahahahahahaha lol..............................

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