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09-24-04, 05:53 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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"The Intro To My Album"
IP: 6DC1 4D5A
This Is The Intro To My Album.. INTRODUCTION MUPHUCKA What Ya'll Think? I Am Looking For Peeps To Collab With On Dis Album.. I Mean Tonz Of Peeps.. FluidMoon I Need Your Hooks and Shit Soon!!! So Holla At Me!! You Wanna Collab Post In Here.. Leave Feedback Peeps! ~R~ |
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09-24-04, 06:17 PM
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New to RV
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nice man
IP: 8CA4 BAF4
keep doing it..........
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09-24-04, 09:02 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: D52C 04A2
Looking For Feedback Pimps..
~R~ |
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09-25-04, 12:46 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: D52C 04A2
.::Uppin Dis...Hit Dis Up Peeps::. ~R~ |
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09-25-04, 12:49 PM
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Aint Afraid To Slaughter
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IP: A190 A400
it said it cant b found or sum shit......
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09-25-04, 01:32 PM
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Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: DBCE DC18
Ok I'm a be real cuz I hate bullshit feed an if u gone do a album u need real feed.....first ya vocals are way too low....or beat is too loud its one of the two but ya levels is off...second your pronounciation is bad....I could only make it make out 2 to 3 words in each line u spit.....chorus wasn't understandable.....u gotta slow down, I know u wanna rap fast but jus cuz u like the slyle doesn't mean it fits you...your mumbling words trying to keep flow an becuz of this it affects ya delivery, my suggestion is you give yourself time to develop before u put out a album cuz first impressions is lasting, an if ya first album people hate they'll always view u as wack.
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09-25-04, 01:34 PM
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Vendetta the K.O. King
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IP: A597 E53E
Quit uppin your track. Read the rules. One more uppin and I'll ban your ass. The rules are simple... There is a reason it's falling to the bottom of the page. Do a new track, improve on some things and post a new one.
-Phenom
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09-26-04, 10:40 AM
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FuxJustAWord
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IP: EECF 4742
i agree with sum of wat N said........... turn ur lyrics up alil............. and sum lines u do mumble and they seem rushed, but juss keep recordin it untill u get it right....... i heard ur chorus and most of ur lines and understood em, so that wasnt a problem for me, but u might wanna improve ur quality with the level of ur vocals and makin sure u dont mumble............ besides that it was better then 70% of the people rappin on this site.......
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09-26-04, 12:25 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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IP: 0825 899A
this wasn't that bad,it was actually pretty good, but i agree with^^^about the production quality, your flow is good, but your voice needs to be heard more, but is a nice intro, just clear it up..............pc
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