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Topic...
watch your back

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check check....this outta be an interesting topic...im reall bored so i might even drop a verse tonight already, probley not tho

Who'd have known that drug lords feelings are so sensitive?//
All I did was tell him that a small order of weed wasn't so imperative//
His face got red and his kunckles began to turn white//
I saw the danger just in time and in fright I ran into the night//
Hours later there were already rumors i was dead//
The lord was so engraged he put a price on my head//
Ember glares burn into my spine as I weep to myself mentally//
I think about my baby and my girl about how much they meant to me//
Creeping down shady looking streets and side alley ways//
Im watching my back making sure to avoid the gang banger gaze//
I can almost feel the cross hair as they graze acorss my spine//
The silk of my coffin glance my face as I come near my time//
The shadow becomes my friend, but it becomes my enemy//
A place to reconcile but a place where a bullet waits for me//
A red hot bitch that can rip through my soul and my heart//
The kind of thing that can split a scalp and give new meaning to "hair part"//
Streetlights are a sign saying "stay Away" as I creep along//
Every listening for that gun shot, aka the Sniper's Song//
Was that movement, no, now im getting paranoid//
In everything lurks my death, something else to avoid//
My friends and family are nonexistent, I am fending for myself//
Fuck fame and wealth...im stuck fending for me, pride up on the shelf//
A jungle of pavement, dumpsters and buildings my place to hide//
The only place where I can have some safety as I cry inside//
I creep up the street, breathing with baited breath//
There the lord was, muzzle glinting, in his eyes were my death

*bang*

im here.............................................. .................................................. ..............................................intr esting......................

I was walkin home head in hands down the usual dark alley way
But this wasnt no ordinary time for it was a shit ending to a bad day
A guy jumped on me viciously n furousioly n pulled a gun to my head
I was terrified he said "Gimme ya wallett motherfucker or i'l shoot you dead"
I emptied my pockets of all its content tryin not to show any fear
He shot off i emotionally collapsed n started to shed a tear
Why me what the fuck did I do to recieve n deserve all this shit
First the haters, discriminators, this n not to mention the hypocrits
Man even I cant explain how i feel with this piece of paper n a pen
Wanna commit suicide why didnt he kill me there n then
I'l never be the same again not after this vicious attack
Now when i walk down that usual dark alleyway i always watch ma back

ok lets get some votes...yes i did redo my verse...i just did that cuz i assumed since Killa checked in 18 hours late that it was counted as a now show, but when I saw you posted I put in my original verse, which at the time i had half done so i finished it up and posted...uppin 4 votes

A2Z...better everything and the whole story was just better had a lot more detail (i dont know what im doin in here-just wanderin waitin for Castle00 to post- so yea i came here) aight later

Kobra u were aight, but u obviously took no time over yo verse, A2Z's was touching and he mos defiatly touch this, i loved the last four lines well done mate, a very convincing victory

vote=A2Z

aight first of all....that wsnt a very good topic i dont think...thers not much you can wist into that...and killa..although you ma homie...your shit was dead basic...and A2Z used some wordple and metaphors that worked well...but i liked this verse particulalry

Ember glares burn into my spine as I weep to myself mentally//
I think about my baby and my girl about how much they meant to me//
Creeping down shady looking streets and side alley ways//
Im watching my back making sure to avoid the gang banger gaze

so ma votes going to A2Z

very good A2z i have to give this one to you i think killa kobra didnt really put much time into it.......the story was just BLAh..
A2Z i was feelin yours throught ........

Vote=A2Z

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umm I hate to be mean but this was a landslide..... A2z had more content more imagery more vocab...more of an actual story....
vote:a2z