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View Poll Results: Who won this battle? | |||
Amend | 2 | 100.00% | |
Baxter D. Wall | 0 | 0% | |
Voters: 2. You may not vote on this poll |
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08-17-03, 01:10 AM | #1 | ||||
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Amend vs. Baxter D. Wall
IP: FDD6 AE15
Check In: Tuesday.
Verses: Thursday. Alright, The Rules... 16-48 Line Limit... No Bullshit... Topic: Rain Drops |
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08-17-03, 01:13 AM | #2 | ||||||
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yes! thank you guys for letting me in...i really appreciate it.
anyways... im in. 333333333333333333333333333333333333333333 |
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08-18-03, 03:14 PM | #3 | |||||||
RB's Grandpa.!
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08-21-03, 03:38 AM | #4 | ||||||
RB's Grandpa.!
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Rain Drops
In The Heart Of Storms, Darkness Mourns - A Tear Is Born What It Departs Is Torn, Beautifuly - Your Fear's Adorn'd Spirits Warn Of The Forming Mass, We All Know The Signs When Light Darkens, Wind Blows, Mixed With No Sunshine Unknown To Time, Un-Predictedly Falls On All Thats Under In Aw And Wonder, Its Speaks With Loud Raws Of Thunder Lost In Summer, Tired, I'd Let Rain Drops Rock Me To Bed But In Winter Its Death, Dead, And Embody'd With Dread Everything Under Man's Control'd, But The Weather Is Not Just Drops, That Once Created - Falling Together Abroad If Its Shown Flight It Cant Stop, Just Pick A Spot To Land Better The Lost Life Of A Drop, Then Giving Not A Chance Caught Off Glance, But Alot Is Missed, - Dark Shutters Day A Chosen Path Of Un-Certainty To Just Find Another Way Puddle's Of Life, Unseen By You, I Have Brought To Frame Trouble Strife's And The Scene Construe's: Drops Of Rain |
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08-21-03, 07:48 PM | #5 | ||||||
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**KEYED**
i dont have the time for it..stupid homo Purple Haze Jamal sat in tears as Brandon slipped into critical, 2 strikes against him, employed..his life was pitiful turned 16..dropped out..tired of the monotonous tendencies at war with the world, good looks and intelligence werent in his weaponry seemed to find mischief effortlessly, it never found an end lived a life of near solitude, betrayal and treachery deprived him of friends Jamal and good deeds didnt blend, lack of a significant other left a gaping whole in his life But Brandon was there for him...throughout all the tribulations and strife Jamal stayed all night, he was reluctant to leave his side went to the restroom only to return to find he had died tears flooded from his eyes, this was his best friend..he thought hed never stop.. fell with the energy of a waterfall...held Brandons hand as they hit his head as soft as Rain Drops... bah..... |
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08-21-03, 11:31 PM | #6 | ||||
Straight Savage.
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this was actually a good battle. Amend had the flow and wordplay hands down, but story wise Baxter actually interested me. This was a tough vote but overall Amend gets my vote. This was still a good battle. peace.
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08-24-03, 02:20 PM | #7 | ||||||
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08-24-03, 04:34 PM | #8 | ||||||
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yeh im afraid amend took this
better imagery and a more polished verse however baxters was a bit more interesting....but lacking in substance due to it being keyed |
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08-24-03, 09:38 PM | #9 | ||||
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IP: FDD6 AE15
Its Deadline Time, Whoever Has More Votes At This Time Will Be
Declared The Winner.. But i Will Not Edit The Poll To Fuck Up Battle Records... So Amend (1-0) Baxter D. Wall (0-1) Good Luck To Both Of You In The Following Weeks To Come |
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