Vote - Blackmage/Dil..

FI/Aimez - Aimez, I felt your piece was... abit off. You didnt portray "insane" in my opinion. Nice flow and vocab, just a bit shy of what the topic encompassed in my point of view. Nice show of emotion though.

FI, Your piece was better. You had my attention the entire time. Very nice imagery and emotion, vocab wasnt over retarded.

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BM, of the three pieces I felt yours hit on point the hardest. You had the most descriptive piece with a ton of imagery, emotion and concept. Nice job man.

Dil, I really didnt care as much for yours as I did BM's. However it was more onpoint than Aimez' piece. I thought you over used some vocab, not mistakenly, just out of place in the text. Nice use of emotion, average imagery and nice concept.

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