Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio |
12-04-05, 09:07 PM | #1 | ||||
www.militantmusic.com
|
One Verse
IP: 9BE1 4F82
Y’all cant match my talent like they was fuckin’ finger prints
My rhymes contain knowledge yours is full of ignorance/ I tell ya about my life of sin you try to hide ya innocence Right Now Ya Thinkin My Bars'll never be good as militants/ Ya Cryin For Mercy beggin’ for me to drop this rap shit I wont, I got it mastered, bastered every lines a classic/ Ya wanna challenge my art then you gonna need practice Plan ya tactics ya need to make ya rhymes attractive/ Come at me lyrically so i take you seriously and respond Just know you gonna lose dude cause u ain’t on the level I’m on/ Cause I know and understand how to handle my bars like BMX From day one i knew it was my fate to be the best/
__________________
Clcik Hear To Hear My Music |
||||
12-04-05, 09:11 PM | #2 | ||||
www.militantmusic.com
|
IP: 9BE1 4F82
|
||||
12-04-05, 11:40 PM | #3 | ||||
B.I.G.
|
IP: 7D8B DD8E
You could have left this bar home:
"Ya Cryin For Mercy beggin’ for me to drop this rap shit" Nice line... I liked it "Come at me lyrically so i take you seriously and respond Just know you gonna lose dude cause u ain’t on the level I’m on/" 8.5/10
__________________
Bizzacckkk |
||||
12-04-05, 11:46 PM | #4 | ||||
www.militantmusic.com
|
IP: 9BE1 4F82
thanks for the feed back man
|
||||
12-05-05, 07:03 PM | #5 | |||||
A Life Of Chryme
|
IP: 7A9A 093F
pretty basic rhyme.
good flow n shit...overall 6/10 keep up the vocab. up ya shit a bit...
__________________
A LIFE OF CHRYME |
|||||
12-05-05, 09:17 PM | #6 | ||||
|
IP: 1BAE 58E9
Closed spend more time doing OM's.
__________________
The Competition
|
||||
12-09-05, 11:03 PM | #7 | ||||||
Light Weight
|
IP: 0D7D 534F
its dope wow at the lil rhymin scheme u got goin on...but make sure ta not just have rhymin words at the end...make sure ta have another set of rhymin words inbetween then anotha set of rhymin words at the end the more diffrent sets of rhymes u put in one line the more impressive it gets...oh by the way this alpha assassin but nos banned me from the fuckin site so i had ta get a diff account...anyway ima give ur shit a 7.5/10, not cuz it was wack but cuz there wasnt that much ta read and like i said u were just rhymin words at the end..otherwise not bad
|
||||||
Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
Display Modes | |
|
|