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09-15-05, 02:45 AM | #1 | |||||
The Topical Juggernaut
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Collab: Will Apear & Mentalz
IP: D35B 3F85
Becoming Obsolete
[Mentalz] … As I sit with my blood-flow tapped an’ spent Half content ta’ leave the past trapped in cement I search the plots as a means ta’ purge my thoughts Cursed and clogged as my brains reversed w/ shots … So I search… I delve Until I tire and quit… … I inquire… I hound Then I expire and sit… … It occurred to me about the tenth splash of Crown Exactly where my life went an’ crashed and Drown Stashed with frowns, I tend ta’ peel back the facts Half intact, but they never really resembled that… …I’m old... I’m young Now behold the Sun… …I’ve tried… I’m meek And now I'm Obsolete… [Willa] Greeted with smiles after a long while our task has been completed We competed they retreated obsolete but the images never deleted victory an addiction eviction from the only love we've ever known crucifixion I'm a victim my home entered half grown i linger liek a drone … So I search… I delve Until I tire and quit… … I inquire… I hound Then I expire and sit… As I grow older I realize, I lost the war in a sense Enemy still lives in my head, only defeated to an extent Lungs deflated Brain vacated ... ... sunny and I can't see the light I'm Obsolete ive been left to cry all alone in the night: …I’m old... I’m young Now behold the Sun… …I’ve tried… I’m meek And now I'm Obsolete…
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12-15-05, 01:56 PM | #2 | |||||
The Topical Juggernaut
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IP: D35B 3F85
Uppin for forum rejuvination.
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Crhyme Sindicate The unexamined life is not worth living.
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12-15-05, 02:17 PM | #3 | ||||
Odi et Amo
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IP: 8BCB 224D
^Get on AIM hoecake hehe
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12-15-05, 05:49 PM | #4 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 59C1 E212
This Piece Was Nice Mentalz, i Like You Expire And Sit Part, As Well As Your First 2 Bars And Willa's Last 2 Bars RTF In My Real Enough C-Rhyme
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