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01-06-04, 08:17 AM | #1 | ||||||
OriginIll
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~Championship~ Feeble Minded VS Allegory
IP: D79C 2834
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Verses Due: Thursday 1-08-04 11:59pm EST Voting Ends: Sunday 1-11-04 11:59pm EST -NO Beefing -NO Feeding -NO Recycling -NO Biting All I Ask Is That You Both Come Out Swinging A Make This Shit An Ill Battle.... If Not... I Will Be Forced To Smack The Weaker One With My 12 inch Penis... Yes, It Is 12 Inches Good Luck |
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01-08-04, 12:58 AM | #2 | ||||||||
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IP: 41E9 3905
just for the record, my original verse was posted at time: 12:02, at which point allegory pm'd me 20 minutes later saying that i wrote to little (my original was 12 lines long). so we agreed to due limit: 1 a.m. If he fails to meet the second due limit i will be pissed.
. . and here we go 'gory. . Quote:
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I've heard things from chrit. . & you said you rap for the fame . . but if thats the case why the fuck're you snatchin a name ? I pressed allegory to drop hard, & he said he's the new thug but I tried to d.a.r.e. him & he said. . . "I don't do drugs" a simple fuck . . no matter what you can't debate perfection cuz `Gore will lose this. . like he did in the '98 election. . I create affection. . after this i'll own u, have the right to boss cuz allegory uses "feeble". . as a nemonic device for loss! & its consequential. . . that I'll turn allegory non-potential cuz 'gory nobody knows of your skill. . like it's confidential . . like bad christians. . you aren't half as good as u vow to be shit. . you only got past M~M on a mere technicality. . I merk u & bring u back to life, this is how the story ends... I'll send u from ashes to ashes. . like this is a crematorium wack fuck, i only feel drizzles but u said ur startin ya reign. . only place you give it your all is in the first parta ya name i start to proclaim, i'll beat u in battle, no matter where it is cuz when it comes to his fate, feebz wrote the narrative. . & it doesn't matter why. . fact is i'll defeat you at this. . trapts quote is a fake personal . . cuz you didn't steal a name, fact is you cease to exist |
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01-08-04, 01:05 AM | #3 | |||
Even If U Like Me..Fuck U
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IP: 8A8C 512E
i'll rhyme to this pest, until he knows that i am the best
and he's half-steppin so much that he'd fail a sobriety test i'll leave this guy in a mess, so he won't even flow again on a scale of one to ten... he's lighter than an ethiopian peeps say he has nice raps, but watch the queer kid fail cuz i wouldnt even buy that if it was on clearance sale Feeble's weird and frail, we'll see his jaw drop when he's losin n i dont even need stencils or pads to draw that conclusion start acceptin it dude, dont be mad that im tellin the truth just be mad at the fact that im sooo much better than u... im bettin its true, you're just another man that tries to spit... who knows his role... as a detective... and is actin like a dick. this faggot guy gets ripped, and now it seems he's scared cuz he has a broken home... when his doll house needs repairs the geek'll tear; he wants to get buck but when i spit better his blood'll be rushin so much, it breaks Emitt Smith's record i'm rappin to the guy, i dont think that the faggots gettin by cuz he's only the sentimental favorite of an apathetic guy i'll be rockin his frame so the whore has to get ripped he just talk a big game, like announcers at sports championships i have unmatchable wit, im damagin quick cuz im an evil rebel while ya lifes an open book, with a 1st grade reading level dont test the illest style, cuz im the best at spittin, while your just a pedophile who tried to molest his inner child this veteran is wild, yet Feeble Minded isnt seein me i'll take him to school... so he can drop out n opt to get his GED start controlin ya jealousy, cuz you know when ya testin me you'll die... and i'll give everyone amnesia when ya only a memory Dere Dude..Sorry For Da Delay.... Just Got Your Pm...yep....Gh05t!...
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01-08-04, 01:32 AM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 41E9 3905
we agreed to 20 through pm's and you spit 28. whatever.
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01-08-04, 08:39 AM | #5 | ||||||
OriginIll
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IP: D79C 2834
ok... lets see
First Allegory... i really thought you came with alot of nice concepts and good punches... everything was worded pretty well Feebs... i enjoyed reading your verse.. you have definatley elevated.. you remind me of me & Mystery... you have a good combination of personals, punches & humor... so i vote for Feebs only because it seemed that Allegory's verse wasn't really directed at Feebs... Allegory could have used his verse against anybody... if he would have personalized it to fit Feebs then he would have won... Vote Feebs |
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01-08-04, 09:15 AM | #6 | |||||||
fuCKYou
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IP: BB92 6178
V/ Feeble
Iunno...i thought Allegory came simplistic with his punches....not complex or anything....he had a few nice punches, but the rest was alot of filler....like volve said....not direct punches = verse gainst anyone....that hurt your verse alot.... Feeble....you came good....i think you came with some nice direct punches....but you still had a few weak lines....didnt like your opener.....but your closer was nice....you won with some better concepts and punches Quotable : i start to proclaim, i'll beat u in battle, no matter where it is cuz when it comes to his fate, feebz wrote the narrative. . |
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01-08-04, 10:40 AM | #7 | ||||||
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IP: 50BD 4E4E
Damn I Suck!!
Last edited by Evolve : 01-08-04 at 10:51 AM. |
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01-08-04, 12:33 PM | #8 | ||||||
Fuck You, I'm Iller
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IP: 843C 2CD1
I'm just going to say I was slightly disappointed in this.
Felt Feeble could have improved his verse greatly by different wordings. Allegory- I'm not even going to get into that verse for reasons I told Feeble of on aim.
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01-08-04, 04:37 PM | #9 | ||||
Yes I Know
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IP: DF7B C8F7
^3-0 you
feebles verse was one the best I've seen from him while allegorys was good but boring, few allright punches but nothing i havent seen before..... nice battle but i expected more for the heavyweight title bout...... VOTE FEEBLE |
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01-08-04, 07:31 PM | #10 | ||||||
Elevating Beyond Perfect
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IP: 4AF1 8BD3
hmmm, wasnt exactly something you'd expect in a heavyweight match but it is what it is....anyways lets get to voting...
Allegory: I doubt thats the original...pretty weak to steal his name but w/e, thats not a factor that would effect you in voting, i didnt really like your verse, had some nice parts but overall it was a type of verse you would see in FL or EFL..... Feeble: Nice verse, not your best but your definately getting better, many wouldve expected more from you both but w/e, you had some nice personals and a nice verse, had some humor in it and it was more then enough to beat allegory Vote-Feeble |
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01-08-04, 08:59 PM | #11 | ||||||
Banned
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IP: 6BD8 834A
You Faggot Fuck... Change Your Name You Fucking Poser
Evolve Last edited by Evolve : 01-09-04 at 08:19 AM. |
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01-08-04, 09:15 PM | #12 | ||||||
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IP: 41E9 3905
lmao @ the name. if your not in origin ill thats just gay .
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01-09-04, 12:51 PM | #13 | ||||||
Light Weight
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IP: D27D 0B18
ConGrats Feeble .. You Deserve To Win
Sudieu
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01-09-04, 01:13 PM | #14 | |||||||
[.Eclipse.]
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IP: 90A0 94DE
...I want first dibs with Feeble after the tourney...
Feebs had better/ harder hittin punches with wittier lyrics. Evolves right he does have the same style as us... sorta. Feebles gets most elevated of the year tie w/ Walter Wall. vote - Feeble Allegory nice concept just not agressively dissin enough
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01-09-04, 01:41 PM | #15 | ||||||
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IP: 7A52 73B1
Vote - Feeble
Not a championship worthy verse from him, but an over all better verse Allegory didn't take this seriously and came with mostly played non direct punches Feeble wins ....Lets get new matches set up |
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