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Old 04-01-03, 07:09 PM   #1
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Nothing would make me Happier

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Don't mind me I'm just clearing head



I would be elated to see you tortured worse than a POW you worthless peice of crap. Your head palmed in my hand hits the concrete with no interference from gravity. Now doesn’t that sound Nice? Better yet lets shove you off a skyscraper. Your screams no longer audible after the freefall has ended. All thats left... a big ass blood spot and dismantled body parts. It would be so much fun to just run you over with that big "Benz" your always sporting. Conceded piss head! How about I tie you up in a dark, drafty, and dreary warehouse. Very pleasant don't you think? Maybe we'll get lucky and it will have a rat infestation. How delightful to hear the scurrying little feet, Audible but not visible. Left in the middle of the room you will never be alone. Ha! Feel good don't it to have hundreds of small undesirable pest by your side. Poor boo-boo! Nothing would make me Happier, but I think I well save these thoughts until you really erk me.
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Old 05-09-03, 08:42 PM   #2
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damnnnnnn killah alot of emotion in this bitch right here i was def feelin it dawg
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Old 05-09-03, 10:45 PM   #3
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yo it was aite.decent vocab and flow, but man it was difficult to read it was all together. It would be alot easier to read if ya seperated each sentance with like a / but thats my opinino. aite nice drop check out my stuff if ya can peace out
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Old 05-10-03, 12:15 AM   #4
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thas deep....
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Old 05-10-03, 08:33 PM   #5
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Thanks! and illspitta4life I'll check out ya stuff and take your advice bu it was supposed to be like that because thats how I was felling... all scrunched together. Holla!
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Old 05-10-03, 08:37 PM   #6
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Oh yea and swiffyus boo I'm not a "dawg" I'm very much female partna
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Old 05-11-03, 11:56 AM   #7
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Niiice descriptiveness..vivid imagery. A little disturbing in some places but, ay.you got ur point across! Stay up
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Old 05-11-03, 08:37 PM   #8
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.... I'm not a "dawg" I'm very much female partna


^that could've jus gone without saying......but w/e

Don't your dad got a Benz? Oh well, but anywho if you really do have such thoughtz, maybe you should take a vacation cuz that ain't right. But then again, you ain't right........
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Old 05-12-03, 06:26 PM   #9
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cdfu....* takin a breath*... Issues...both of yall
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Old 05-13-03, 07:08 PM   #10
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Dyce shut up! Its just a poem!

And D you the one with the issues! You really do dislike your people
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Old 05-14-03, 06:09 PM   #11
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Old 05-14-03, 06:33 PM   #12
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Bac at you heffa
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Old 05-17-03, 07:09 PM   #13
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u fucking crazy bitch/you could tie me up bring in some rats an when dey chew a hole in da ropes ill break free an tie u up an put army ants in ya pussy then fuck u wit a condom made out of sand paper then bite ya nipples off an glue em on ya back so i can see some titti wile hitting u doggystyle
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Old 05-18-03, 11:49 PM   #14
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umm... wtf?/, u lookin like a muthafuckin duck,/how the fuck u come at my nig like u big or some shit./ Imma show you how small u are,/ u gonna find ya fuckin dick im a mason jar,/ cut ya body up, /u full of scars and holes and shyt,/ u make me fuckin sick,/ next time u try to spit,/ try not to sound like shit.


stay up chica u kno who got ya back
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Old 05-19-03, 11:04 AM   #15
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u fucking crazy bitch/you could tie me up bring in some rats an when dey chew a hole in da ropes ill break free an tie u up an put army ants in ya pussy then fuck u wit a condom made out of sand paper then bite ya nipples off an glue em on ya back so i can see some titti wile hitting u doggystyle


whor are you kid? u got beef wit my girl or somethin?
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