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10-16Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no d/r

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-13-04 at 07:46 PM

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Trojan has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-13-04 07:17 PM.

untouchablekilla has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-13-04 07:21 PM.

ya punches are like fans to pac...they always gon miss me...
i use complicity in punches,to lyrically burn this emcee...
ya could put macs in ya verse,and it still wouldnt pack heat...*
ya could vote for ya self five times,but ya still gon get beat...
am treatin ya game like a fat bitch...aint no chance its gettin a look...
id have to be high on some chronic shit...for both of them to look good...**
am truly tht ill....im lyrically sicker thn somebody wit flu...
ya lines played so much like a lil kids brand new PS2...***
untouchable...shit...looks like ma rhymes got ya wrapped...
u made a mistake..dont ever come battle me without ya metal packed...****
u aint killin shit bitch...am twistin ya wordz round
am bound to merk ya down...leave this fag lookin like a clown...
dont fool yaself man..ya stupid..our mindz aint never gon collide...
ya still couldnt be up on ma level...even if u took an helicopter ride...*****
ya lookin straight at the screen..kid..tht puts ya behind ma bars...
locked up..tht makes ya owned..like ferrari owns cars...


*mac is a gun...packin heat..carryin a gun
**id have to be high for a fat bitch to look good,
and id av to be high for his verse to look good
***lil kids play they ps2 for ages,ya cnt get em off it....
shit ya cnt even get me off it...especially when ya jus bought it...
****wrapped..also whens somethins finished(its a wrap)..metal means gun
*****hes in midz collide...helicopter takes ya high...and im on a high level...

untoucabalekilla really a untouchable vet will never answer to threats
used ya verse to whipe my ass, and i still aint fellin ya text
trojan you cant topple me, im about to beat ur ass properly
The only way you could match my skill is when you literaly copy me
my lines shine, rhyme after rhyme to go and blind your eyes
hit from the blindside, not like u... hittin on bi blind guys*
my style has readers eager to read avoid the drawnout suspense…/
your weak structure promotes little change like a DNA sequence
its no lie u've been ripped like people with dead plasma
punch's will leave u short on breath like midget's on asma
fuck this last line,i dont need it,this is the only useless line i need
I just type words like oxygen,so i give ya some time to breathe

for the herbs that dont know wut bi means its bisexual which means u like males and females

aight...nice verse g.........uppin this shit yall.............

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yo, imma just give you feedback becuz for the simple fact i cant vote on a weak battle... i saw that you were too scared to battle somebody... is it cuz, your shit is weak... and it was a newb... and i heard he was talkin' shit about you, whacha gone do? do sumpin'... if you think you bad, beat a newb...

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hahahahahahha.....wot a dik...yes i turned him dwn....but if i was scared...do u think i would turn him down(A new kid...wit 0-0 recored n 20 posts)....to come an battle a member of midz collide wit a 3-0 record.......uses ur fuckin brain son.....i want repect..u aint gon gettin tht battilin newbs when u bin ere for 5 months........and stop freepostin cos tht wasnt even feedback.....u just proved why i dont battle newbs....lmfao.....idiot...

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lmao weak battle? haha d00d i could rip u with 2 lines stfu herb....

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thnks g........this other guy whos new wanted too battle just b4 we set this up......and i turned him dwn cos i didnt wanna battle a newb....on my life i cn guarantee tht ur better thn him....so i obviously wasnt scared...i came and battled a member of mindz collide instead.....im a member of clas sic.......hmmmm...oh yer...i must av been scared.......lol.....anyway us guys who arent herbs understand why we dont battle em...and he just proved it......lol

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Voted For: Trojan

was feel'n trojan's drop it was hot

good mets, and punches and personals,


personals//troj
[unches//troj

structure..un touchable

flow//troj


vote//troj

Vote disqualified for Cheating.

^unexplained vote going 2 be removed

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thnks yo......but explain it properly............its gon get removed.........pz

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Voted For: Trojan

ya know at first iwasnt feel'n this to be honest, but as i read on it got better and better haha its like a stripper, hahaha, but yea you took it , but it was fucking close as shit...ok not really.. props to untouchable, u had a tyte drop but it wasnt as hot as this cats..

personals,punches,meta//trojan

untouchablekilla u get structure


return da favor i'm upp bby 2

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notice how none his shit rhymes... he wrote that in 15 mins my ass haha

Vote disqualified for Cheating.