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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-12-04 at 07:42 PM

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DQ'ed due to banning

Street poet has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 07:14 PM.

NoMercy has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-12-04 07:22 PM.

You claim you elevated..wit over 400 posts..i know you never go outside..
Leap Ya Pride..cause like racist mail man In black areas..You post n hide..

My take ova is about to start with you so become mah first elite victum....
And watch yeah win get cancelled quicker then wayan's brothers sitcoms.....

You'll get stabbed with writes, poet quick to put ya hands In ya dentures so you can grab a bite..
Who knew mercy gets slashed In fights.. end ya middle aged chrisis and like pc games give you half Life! ..

Spread ya like bacterial might as well throw items In dumpsters, all Im doing Is wasting material ...
Grow Up mercy and bitch wash ya Vetereal... because It seems your only for kids like Trix Cereals !!...

My styles recievin In flares, make this kid step down And I aint talkin about leavin In stairs !...
Better start pleading and care, attack me with Ya head And still wouldn't percieve wins by a hair ..

Get chained with big brained graphs.. sustain ya laughs kid becuase I heard ya give long head like girraffes.....
Cut ya frame In halves, Im insane with plans.. you stepped over the line so I slained Ya calves !! ....

Street poet think he can “tangle” with me but “cant” he even see that im almost a vet/(1)
Now im the only one that’s young like “proverse” we stay up and you better not bet/.(2)
Dropen you fast well be “done” with ease sometime I make yer mouth drop with “silence”/(3)
Cuz of the way I spit to “generic” and it makes you think im on the high of the streets with “violence”/.(4)
Written songs I do that every day to “elevate” and take out bitches like you cuz im “generic”/(5)
Pff I kno yer “scared” of me but what can I say im to “barbaric”/.(6)
Now you lost cuz of the way I threw it to yer “ear” to make sure you here, what now you “embarrassed”?/(7)
You to fake like a faggot nerd yer “bones weak” to easy to spit and break yer ear drums cuz yer the “rarest”/.(8)
Haha is what I will be saying after im threw with you it “happened” so fast/(9)
You fell to the ground and cryed and “snitched” cuz my rhymes are way over yours, you could say there “surpassed”/.(10)

yer luckey i didnt spit good but later ill battle you a rematch

Voted For: Street poet

IIGHT STREET VERSE WAS BETTA..THA PUNCHES STRUCTURE,METAS,SOME PERSONALS A LIL VOCAB NOT THAT MUCH... YA LINES WAS A LIL 2 LONG MAYN

NOMERCY URS WASNT BAD JUSS YA STRUCTURE WAS OFF Y U HAVE WORDS N " THEY DONT HAVE N E THING 2 DO WITH WAT U GONNA SAY... FIX YA STRUCTURE AND HAVE HARDER PUNCHES ..NO HATE MAYN

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hotter then shit homie, way to spit that legit shit. Dis my lil Nigga right herre. You killin em mayne. Ya'lls betta look out the South and the West fin ta test all the rest.

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Voted For: Street poet

alright i was feel'n ya drop , it was a little stretched but it you kept your punches com'n, nice drop my fav line was these ones

My styles recievin In flares, make this kid step down And I aint talkin about leavin In stairs !...
Better start pleading and care, attack me with Ya head And still wouldn't percieve wins by a hair ..

Get chained with big brained graphs.. sustain ya laughs kid becuase I heard ya give long head like girraffes.....
Cut ya frame In halves, Im insane with plans.. you stepped over the line so I slained Ya calves !! ....


^funny ass shit


personals//no mercy
punches//steet
meta's// def street
structure/no mercy (street short ya shit)
flow//street

cloooose battle nice drop on both sides, no hate, and NO MERCY if you say this is a hate vote i swear , this was a legit drop , and i dont hate ya ass, cept when u act stupid

this legit vote goes to//streetpoet

drop an honest vote... only way this cat could win is with a hate vote on me haha http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=149172

aight uppin 2-0 uppin peeps

Voted For: Street poet

DAYUM
you
got
mad
punches
street
poet
lol
werd

FUCK FUCK FUCK lmao i was gonna go to Feedback..... lol pm strobe man and tell him to get rid of that.

Removed

ok i wish i kept it but ok i'll get strobe mayne

Voted For: Street poet

kid ur illlllll fo sho'z mayne keep doing it yo thang

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