Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 09-29-04 at 04:55 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

LyriCal HavoK has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-04 03:15 PM.

J DOT has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-29-04 03:15 PM.

aight...check it

he can connect wires and flip the switch...but still wont see the light//--1
shows his verse has no power behind it...technically he's outta sight//--2
compare our might, in physics his skills are grounded...while mine are outta sight//--3
claim to beat me is like peasents say they're god...you just dont have the right//--4
im in this fight, call you an oreo the way your black...yet you talk and write white//--5
your underwear is on too tight, if ya wanted to lose ya virginity..shoulda slept at M.J's Last night//--6

um...no hate on M.J just used what people claim...innocent until proven guilty...

Even if you made the biggest loogy, you still couldnt spit
Your wack lines are limited…like cell phone minutes
you'll get cut off in a instant, you’re a Lyrical “Chaos"
5-0 means I owned you, just call me boss
I’ll turn you into my slave, like the roots of ya kins
Even with yo copied lines, you couldnt a win
Don’t make me expose you to these folks, I had second thoughts
I got connects on RV, I’ll watch yo little ass rot


-i got things to do...6 lines, round 2 after you spit

upnnnnnnnnnn thissssss shittttttttttttt

uppin 4 votes...

Voted For: J DOT

You get this one cause your punches were abit harder. It seems like the other guy keep repeating himself wit da words he used to rhyme wit. His punches were ok too. Your structure wasn't all that and could have been better but you get this one.

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aiyo...uppn this...good lookn...i was thinkn that too...he kept repeating hissself...uppn, need more votes

Voted For: LyriCal HavoK

I was feelin J Dot's but LH's flow got my attention, the closer was ill

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Voted For: J DOT

i wasnt feeling lyrical havoks flow...he had too many repeated flows, and too many nursery rhymes. j dot didnt come as hard as some verses i seen him create, but he had like 2 or three ill punchlines...this battle didnt have too many personals...
lyrical havok- work on your structure and your rhyming, j dot got you on that, other than that, you probably wouldve took this one...my vote goes to j dot, good battle

big woody d/r votes gunna get dq'd tomorrow...how unexplained...aiyo...gotta up this

still no votes....uppn this battle....

Voted For: J DOT

Vote J dot

Harder hitting punches and better use of wordplay....

Even if you made the biggest loogy, you still couldnt spit
Your wack lines are limited…like cell phone minutes
Could have hit harder if worded different

you'll get cut off in a instant, you’re a Lyrical “Chaos"
5-0 means I owned you, just call me boss
This was good

I’ll turn you into my slave, like the roots of ya kins
Even with yo copied lines, you couldnt a win
Descent
Don’t make me expose you to these folks, I had second thoughts
I got connects on RV, I’ll watch yo little ass rot
Good


L havok too strecthed and played punhces, i though you would have come harder but i guess not.....

he can connect wires and flip the switch...but still wont see the light//--1
shows his verse has no power behind it...technically he's outta sight//--2
This started off dumb and ended ok

compare our might, in physics his skills are grounded...while mine are outta sight//--3
claim to beat me is like peasents say they're god...you just dont have the right//--4
didnt like that how you used outta sight like that 2 times

im in this fight, call you an oreo the way your black...yet you talk and write white//--5
your underwear is on too tight, if ya wanted to lose ya virginity..shoulda slept at M.J's Last night//--6
this was wack and plain ole stupid.....
probably lost the battle for you

Be more creative both of you


he can connect wires and flip the switch...but still wont see the light//--1
shows his verse has no power behind it...technically he's outta sight//--2
compare our might, in physics his skills are grounded...while mine are outta sight//--3
claim to beat me is like peasents say they're god...you just dont have the right//--4
im in this fight, call you an oreo the way your black...yet you talk and write white//--5
your underwear is on too tight, if ya wanted to lose ya virginity..shoulda slept at M.J's Last night//--6

Vote J DOt

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