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checkin in....


Have Fun... Dont let your dick get rode too hard, might fall off.

OK Ill tell LatinKitten to get off it soon
BigChase

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check....

Try to get LatinKittens dick out of your ass
And buy yourself some tampons your bitching never ceases....

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get real son.... actin like you're untouchable when you're takin your time postin a topic so you got a week to prewrite.... keep actin like you're fuckin with me. you'll need the luck.

Hmm.. Actually u will need the luck.. plz no more beef..

-I. Mind

IF you harass another mod or another contestant your out....

BC

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[QUOTE=BigChase]
She was my cure, she made me pure
Without her my life would be a blur
She's a divine creation; blessing by the Lord
Our love couldn't be described with words
She opened zones, her breathe my own
Intimate were all the moments we spent alone
Her hair so fair, skin so tender and smoothe
breasts round and full, no blemishes or a bruise
All her demands would suprise her that I would meet
Taking comfort as I guard her body as she sleeps
She hadn't learned of our passionate disposiiton
She would soon desire our long forlorn traditons
One night we were all alone, in our home there was a ring
THere he was, chisled, tall, and yet evil's seed
MY love for her beautiful body, and his evil raged
Yet I couldn't stop my excitement as the slowly engaged
He became me, his body my own, as I slowly mimic their actions
I became one with them form my desolate spot, full of satisfaction
Ahhhh the feelings of ingenuity built on top of with society
I Deeply moan as pleasures of God's time with me
As my deed done, my exhilation turns to rage
Hes been holding me from my loved one, self imposed cage
My search franticaly for his demise, an object of pain
Steel to make quence my eternal thirst for limbs, his blood my rain
MY screams mirrored his own, dark clouds surround our home
the darkness only revealed one light her helpless groans
I grabbed her soft pale hand tainting it with his blood
His filth contaminated her enough , his mud on my dove
I brushed her hair aside to look into her hazel eyes
Her silence for minutes and the look of suprise
I felt down her soft breast, lusciously with passion
As my hand lowered I felt an object protruding and fastened
I felt a handle, what is this object here
as I looked down only the devils breath made such evil appear
A knife affecting us all, death at it worst and best
a sun risen in the east, clouded by the moon in west
her beauty stolen from within but mine for the knife
for us both now to lay as husband and wife

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12:30?
12@ night is the deadline.........

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jst forget it big!! Cuz come on, u really want a no show?

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no show is no show...I would have liked to have a battle w/ a new topic and I could drop dope instead of recycling but its too late...

Plus he had 5 days to drop....

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Big win's by deadline

Thread Closed!!!

-I. Mind

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thread re-opened..

bigchase, i really have to be fair man, I gave you 5 extra day's to post your verse, and this guy didn't ask for anything, so 30 minutes extra is nothin bad, i really have to let that slide, it's jst not fair that you had 5 extra day's wen he jst needed 5 extra minutes

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... anyone gonna vote?

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my vote goes to big chase
reason:
i was feelin the story line that big chase had and he came more complex and creative with it and gave a good imagery. i enjoyed reading his peice cuz it had a good flow to it. i was feelin the emotion from akwordz peice but i felt like he didnt come as creative as big chase. he came closer to being typical with it. what akwordz lacked was a good flow. it was hard to flow with your peice because of the way you set out your rhymes to end, just work on your flow and ull get better. so overall i enjoyed reading big chase's peice more so...
v.big chase
ps. This is Elemental Soul