Music Is Dying


Follow Me. .

Deep into the Music, where a Beat is Useless
And writers voice Alone is the Soul of Featured Blueprints.
the Speakers Intuitive Aspects, have Gasped their Last Breath
and from here on out, drum & base’ll be mentioned in Past Tense
the Absent Minded wont Follow, & will try to Define it as Hollow
but I strongly believe poetry will be the ‘Rhyme’ of Tomorrow.
Lines of ‘Borrowed’ beat samples, sound amped & create hype,
But that cant compare to how raw emotion Sounds on the Mic.
You cant put Down or Define how an artist Plots In His Head
Or can speak with Intensity, and make you feel What Is Said.
Now that’s Real lyricism, no instrumental For Help
Just an artist with something to say and then, Hoping He’s Felt.
Exposing his Writers Voice, and theirs Legions To Teach
Beneath the music lies its one true sign: Freedom Of Speech
Hiphop’s not of Interest To Me, so its Useless Trying
I see spoken word as the future.


Music Is Dying.


RB Legend

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W o r d P e r f e c t

this peice was off the hook...great concept and you stayed on topic throughout the whole song...flow was there and you had sum nice vocab....

i'd give it a 9.5/10

Great piece Camarac. Nice conept and flowwas quality, couldword play and vocab keep it up. Nice to c more qualiy homegrown talent emerging from England.

hit my rhyme called time bomb

^itl explode

tight verse....id say 9/10

Nigga this was a 10/10 Sheiiiiiiiiiiiiit, RB legends Mahfuckahz!

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W o r d P e r f e c t

Nice shit right here. I liked the flow and all. Keep elevaten play.

OUT

-High Class a.k.a Confusion

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i like, very good verse u had a subject and stuck with it all thru the verse.

^ that IS the main point to open mics = /

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W o r d P e r f e c t

nice peice man, good vocab and rhyme structure alot of ill lines, umm dont really know what you did wrong, well write somethen longer next time so the pleasure lasts longer lol, could you hit my oeice up called change of heart and mind, ited be great if u couled thanx
9.5/10

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Corrupted Visions

I read this one @ Hype I believe... a good read and something to think about. Much respect.

Ive only dropped one piece at Hype and this wasnt it = /

Dope Piece Man

Definately Legends, I'm Loving the Message Your Putting Across With the Imagery

Keep it Up

its good
mabey Rbs Legends
.Mabey
Nice imagery
Word Choice'
All that.

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