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Old 11-21-05, 03:33 AM   #1
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My Ambitions *NEW TRACK* Featuring Zone Out * Implicit
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My Ambitions
this is for the rv rap game
I spit 1st.
I do the hook.
then its Implicit
and he does the hook.
enjoy this inspirational track from Myself and Implicit


Im also an idiot.
I had the track since friday, but when Implicit was sendin me the verse, I went to sleep, cos he got slow ass dial up
I had forgot I had the damn thing, but Im seriously hopin thats its all good Apexx.
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Old 11-21-05, 03:43 AM   #2
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Old 11-21-05, 03:49 PM   #3
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aint this about a bitch
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Old 11-21-05, 03:58 PM   #4
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Listnin...............Beats Nice

Emotinos Good

Deliverys Dope

Lyrics Are Kool

Flows On Point,You DOnt Fall Off Once

Like The Secret Dont Tell Line

Right Hooks Up

Implicit

Dope Delivery

Nice Emotion

Lyrcis Are Dope

Presence Is Nice


Hook As U On

Qualitys Better


Aight Its Done

Overall:8/10

Good Track

Plz Rtf On My "Underground Type.Ft Limited Edition
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Old 11-21-05, 04:01 PM   #5
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yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeah
I dont get mad
I just get money!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 11-21-05, 04:02 PM   #6
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Old 11-22-05, 09:52 AM   #7
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Old 11-22-05, 05:11 PM   #8
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this is mellow nice and laid back.....your flow is cool nice laid back delivery...quality is really holdin you back......your verse was cool....i dont like the hook you shoulda added a lil reverb to the hook...implicit your voice is cool ya flow aight.....hook sounds better wit implicit iono overall decent track...if yall wanna collab hit me up eckoinstincts =1=
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Old 11-22-05, 05:23 PM   #9
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thanks for the feedback.
I'll RTF on anything if you need it.
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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Old 11-22-05, 05:41 PM   #10
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well...ok delivery and lyrics and shit.But I found the flow sounded forced a bit in my opinion.Hook was ok.
Implicit's verse was ok too.Flow was better IMO.But he seemed a lil' "pressed" on the beat..as opposed to laid back..which sounded a bit awkward..

Overall...decent track..
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Old 11-22-05, 06:59 PM   #11
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this beat is hot...like it...your flow does sound kind of forced and your voice is decent man...the hook on your part isnt that bad...the second verse is.....the flow is alittle better...the voice is alright.....the lyrics are alright on both parts....the hook on this part isnt that bad..

this track...wasnt bad but its wasnt great...its alright....no hate though man....just keep dropping and keep it coming man...

can you drop some feedback on my old track
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Old 11-23-05, 12:15 AM   #12
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thanks for the feedback
and my flow sound forced?
How?
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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Old 11-24-05, 01:43 PM   #13
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Listening...I love the beat man...You rode it well, nothing wrong with flow...First dude quality is a little iffy, but nothing serious...Lyrical wise, it was not the best, but it did send a message. Im feeling the hook...Second dude, Im feeling this verse...Came in well, good emotion.

Overall, solid track, something I would def. give a few more listens. Props.

RTF and leave some feed on my new track "Questions"

Thanx bro.
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Old 11-24-05, 11:04 PM   #14
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thanks for the feedback.
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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Old 11-30-05, 07:22 PM   #15
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Wow. I aint even think you was gonna post this one up. But it's lookin good so thanks to everyone that dropped some feed
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