You Ready.?
- ! : Flawless : ! - vs FiRe
IP: 407A 7E84
Battle Rules:
6 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feeding
Minimum posts to vote: 20
Check in by: 11-11-04 at 02:04 PM
Must drop verse in 65 minutes after check in.
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11-11-04, 01:00 PM
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#2
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Guest
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IP: 407A 7E84
- ! : Flawless : ! - has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-11-04 01:00 PM.
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11-11-04, 01:05 PM
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#3
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Guest
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IP: B7EB 8905
FiRe has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-11-04 01:05 PM.
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11-11-04, 01:05 PM
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#4
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You Ready.?
IP: 407A 7E84
im hot like pepper sauce flawless bout to make u Retire
U Eatin hotsauce when u shitin datz da only time ya ass on fire
my skillz iz 1 of da most desirez,i rain punches like seattle
they call me un-predictable but dogg itz predictable i won diss battle
im quick to kill ya like a snake wit out a rattle b
tha only way ya namez fire becuz u got to battle me
$ ~1 ~ $
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11-11-04, 01:09 PM
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#5
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Banned: Spamming
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IP: B7EB 8905
flawless ull be on the floor thinking less
ull have no life cuz u just came n strated to mess
flaw yep ull be there crying soon enuf
fuck ya face up like u a fuckin puff
man u cud be homo even if u wasnt sexual gay-bo
man u got no skill cuz beat a guy stoned so yo-hoe
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11-12-04, 03:44 PM
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#6
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.:$outh$ider:. 4 Life....
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IP: 7517 1E63
Voted For: - ! : Flawless : ! -
not dat much of a good battle but
Flawless took this one
openin verse-flawless
structure-hmm...tied
punchlines-not dat many but flawless took it
multis-flawless
metas-hmmm...
personals-not enuff or any? problably a tied
overall verse-flawless
no hate on this battle aight peace........
__________________
.:As Each day passes by, Each day i grow stronger:.
Free Agent
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11-18-04, 04:06 PM
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#7
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mess with me get cooked
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IP: 2DCB A815
Voted For: - ! : Flawless : ! -
im hot like pepper sauce flawless bout to make u Retire
U Eatin hotsauce when u shitin datz da only time ya ass on fire
^^^^^^^^^^^^ "EH' DONT STRETCH CHA LINES THAT MUCH MAYNE BUT GOOD PUNCH
my skillz iz 1 of da most desirez,i rain punches like seattle
they call me un-predictable but dogg itz predictable i won diss battle
^^^^^^^^^^^^ ALL FLOW NO PUNCH ALL FLOW
im quick to kill ya like a snake wit out a rattle b
tha only way ya namez fire becuz u got to battle me
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NICE CLOSA GOOD PUNCH
FLAW- U HAD AN GOOD "OK" VERSE U HAD PUNCHES AND PERSONALS AND META'Z
flawless ull be on the floor thinking less
ull have no life cuz u just came n strated to mess
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ERM KINDA WEAK MAYNE NO PUNCH
flaw yep ull be there crying soon enuf
fuck ya face up like u a fuckin puff
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ DOESNT MAKE SENSE PLUS ITS AN WACK PUNCH ELEVATE
man u cud be homo even if u wasnt sexual gay-bo
man u got no skill cuz beat a guy stoned so yo-hoe
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ NOT AN GOOD CLOSA MAYNE
DEVIL- U NEED TO ELEVATE BAD MAYNE, PUNCHES WERENT GOOD AT ALL MAYNE
FLOW (FLAW)
PUNCHES (FLAW)
META'Z (FLAW)
FLAW GOT DIS HANDS DOWN IN ALL CATEGORIES
DEVIL- ELEVATE ON PUNCHES AND FLOW BUT MOSTLY PUNCHES
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THE SLEEP & THE DREAM-
Quote:
Originally Posted by Wreckage
Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.
Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.
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SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!
P.S.A
COMING SOON- GODS BETRAYL
OUT NOW -THE SLEEP & THE DREAM
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11-18-04, 05:16 PM
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#8
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The Watcher
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IP: 28D6 AD76
Voted For: - ! : Flawless : ! -
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Flawless, ya verse was aight...you're gonna need to work on the punches tho, make 'em more creative next time...the 'ass on fire' line is played yo...anyways, u had decent consistency, which was a plus........Devil, ya shit was way too basic...u definitely need ta' up yourself creativity-wise wit punches n shit...no hate, just some honest feedback...both yall stay up
V/ Flawless, for more creativity...
i need an honest vote here:
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=157669
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11-21-04, 02:42 PM
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#9
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Puttin MD On The Map
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This was feedback posted for - ! : Flawless : ! -
IP: 408D D2A2
checkin polls mayne.......for crew related reasons...
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.:Retired:.
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11-21-04, 04:01 PM
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#10
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IP: 258C A279
Voted For: - ! : Flawless : ! -
flawless ull be on the floor thinking less
ull have no life cuz u just came n strated to mess
…no
flaw yep ull be there crying soon enuf
fuck ya face up like u a fuckin puff
…meh no again
man u cud be homo even if u wasnt sexual gay-bo
man u got no skill cuz beat a guy stoned so yo-hoe
…no
im hot like pepper sauce flawless bout to make u Retire
U Eatin hotsauce when u shitin datz da only time ya ass on fire
…decent
my skillz iz 1 of da most desirez,i rain punches like seattle
they call me un-predictable but dogg itz predictable i won diss battle
…okay
im quick to kill ya like a snake wit out a rattle b
tha only way ya namez fire becuz u got to battle me
…decent closer
Flawless took this one…
Had harder punches…a decent
Structure & a nice flow too…
Devil…work on yo shit mayn..
Those punches were weak…nun of them
Made any sense tho…but elevate more
Tho
Pz.
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..The Council..
7 Day Theory
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11-25-04, 03:41 AM
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#11
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New to RB
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This was feedback posted for - ! : Flawless : ! -
IP: 615F 6336
handz down blaza won dis battle. he had better flow-rhymes-and just blew away devil. devil u need to work on ur flow alot more i was a bit lost trying to read it even though it waz 6 linez it was stil confuzin. the outcome= blaze da winna
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11-25-04, 03:51 AM
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#12
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Lyrical Prosperity
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This was feedback posted for - ! : Flawless : ! -
IP: 6C76 BECF
checking polls......
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11-26-04, 01:46 AM
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#13
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You Ready.?
IP: 6E1D CDF2
can uguyz juss vote to close the battle man????????
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Young Savior
I got Newark on my pinky
Elizabeth on my thumb dude
Camden on my middle finger screamin fuck you
Rock ice in Trenton so dats da ring finger
You know I had to keep North Brunswick on da Trigga Finger
I Gotta hot bitch but i didint mean to play her
Props To Papoose BUT!, im da YOUNG SAVIOR
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11-27-04, 08:06 AM
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#14
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Banned
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IP: B417 DEF0
Voted For: - ! : Flawless : ! -
this was easy N weak as the same time....
blaze got this win hands down but hes battlers was WEAK AS FUCK so this was a no-brainer....
flow: blaze
punches: blaze
creativeness: blaze
vote: blaze...
yo blaze are u from NJ?? or BX??
i think i might know who u are if u are the same blaze im thinking of............
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