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03-01-05, 08:52 PM
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"Fuck Wit Me, Then You Fuckin Wit Tha Best"
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"3 Roundz"
IP: 66CB DD4F
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/bmoresmafiamusic.htm
"3 Roundz" Hit me up wit Feed Back............................... Links: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1994953 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179439
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03-01-05, 09:14 PM
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My Dick Stay Wet
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IP: 3240 794D
dis was a nice shit to listen too.....had da flow down and errythang....nice lyrics.....shit was tight fam..........im lookin forward to hearin more of your shit lata..............
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03-01-05, 09:17 PM
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"Fuck Wit Me, Then You Fuckin Wit Tha Best"
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IP: 66CB DD4F
Thanks son, good lookin....................Uppin................... .....
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03-01-05, 09:23 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: E137 0BC4
aight fam.
1st verse- flow was aight on the beat staggered in a few spots...delivery is str8 need to gain more confidence on the beat...running out of breathe...lyrics were coo... 2nd verse- multis are good...flow and delivery is better...this verse is better than the first...did u use that technique i was talking about...? 3rd- sound more confident...multis and good...flow is coo... overall this was an ok track needs some polishing but i see mad potential fam...holla return the feed http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179666
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03-01-05, 09:25 PM
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"Fuck Wit Me, Then You Fuckin Wit Tha Best"
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IP: 66CB DD4F
Ite Son thanks wit the feedback, i got u back as soon as i cum bac cuz im bout to bounce for a minute................Uppin
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03-01-05, 09:37 PM
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The Rulers Back
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IP: CDAA 2D0A
ima d/l now dawg ill edit with feed once its finished.. why you neva on aim lol?...get on gotta holla at you......
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03-02-05, 02:41 PM
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"Fuck Wit Me, Then You Fuckin Wit Tha Best"
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IP: 66CB DD4F
im always on aim son, ...........Dafuturejoka
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Young Montana "No More Mista Nice Guy" Rapdemon: fuck man DaFutureJoka: wa? Rapdemon: u=dope DaFutureJoka: lol Rapdemon: im goin thru ur whole soundclick DaFutureJoka: thanks? Rapdemon: haha PSA |
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03-02-05, 03:19 PM
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Hell yeah
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IP: 344C 52FF
listening:
beat is pretty dope lyrics are pretty good nice freestyle flow is pretty cool, overall nice shit dog peace return the favor: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...344#post1996344 |
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03-02-05, 08:17 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: 1628 4BC6
yeah this shit is good all you need to change is the way you was coming in at the intro you seemed like you wasnt ready to get on the mic, and during the verse you should come harder, but the further in the track he came harder like got more confident, but it might just be cause it was a freestyle
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03-02-05, 09:34 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 0825 899A
not feeling the quality or the first verse really, your not really saying anything out standing, not that you have to, but it is kind of boring me...............I guess if it is a free its kool....................see now you are hitting it, pass thru ya area, three feet of......etc.......you need a little work on your delivery. I am losing you on the third, your flow is falling off, like your not freestylin, but remembering what you said before, then you come back to freestylin, and your off. not bad for a free, but not the greatest. I need to peep some more of your shit.
hit my link up when you get the chance http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179850 |
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03-03-05, 02:53 AM
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Rastafari Walk Tall
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IP: 8D85 0A36
damn i told u u had skils back when u was new and straight text....an u got talent in audio aswell....might jus record that diss I was supposed 2 do ages ago..lol
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03-03-05, 04:23 AM
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New to RV
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IP: FC85 4903
Ok..Beat is IIght..First Verse IS iite..Needs a bit Of Work In Certain Spots Fam..Like they All Said..Second Verse..Was a Bit Better..The Third Verse Showed Much Better Improvement Over The Two..Lyric Wise, Flow wise etc..Keep Droppin..
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03-03-05, 02:53 PM
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"Fuck Wit Me, Then You Fuckin Wit Tha Best"
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IP: 66CB DD4F
ite thanks for the feed yall good lookin, lol at Acuity lol .......................Uppin
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Young Montana "No More Mista Nice Guy" Rapdemon: fuck man DaFutureJoka: wa? Rapdemon: u=dope DaFutureJoka: lol Rapdemon: im goin thru ur whole soundclick DaFutureJoka: thanks? Rapdemon: haha PSA |
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03-03-05, 03:23 PM
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Rastafari Walk Tall
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IP: B811 9032
yo Blac-Out we can get sm frienly dissin goin..u down 4 that? elevation n shit...
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03-03-05, 11:44 PM
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"Fuck Wit Me, Then You Fuckin Wit Tha Best"
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IP: 66CB DD4F
yea its wateva....................................Uppin
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