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04-11-06, 06:40 PM
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"1 potato, 2 potato, 3 potato, 4"...new hot joint from ya boy...holla!
IP: 64CA 6C26
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^Click on "One potato, two potato, three potato, four" Beat: Devize Hook: Q, inspired by the nursery rhyme "one potato, two potato..." Verses: 1 & 2 Q Concept: I'm spitting str8 braggin/violent type lyrics here as I practice different rhyme schemes...It's just a topical people...I'm not really promoting violence or pretending like I'm a gangsta. Holla atcha boy 1 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226292 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=226287 |
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04-11-06, 06:41 PM
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IP: 0573 7825
i thought u were leaving this site u piece of shit
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04-11-06, 06:57 PM
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IP: CD71 1C32
Yea this beat I was gonna use to, I might still use it lol. I like the tittle you came up with as well and the way you wrote made it stand out better. the message is the track is fuckin tight, I like it. the hook kinda sounds off in a few places but it's not horrbily off I still like it. hmm you picked up your flow on the 2nd verse which I like, gets me more into it. I might just download this one man. overall I liked it keep up the good work man.
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04-11-06, 07:16 PM
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IP: EB0F 1D75
Listenin...vocals a lil too loud..beat quite simple but fits track ya know..flow is decent...very old school joint to me, reminds me summin that wud be bumped in 1995..haa word..lyrics are decent...hook is good..catchy...delivery is good...Ill break it down like you...
Whats good: Flow, delivery is simple goes wit tha beat... Whats Not: Too loud vocals...thts it..not my type of joint but this is real decent...9/10
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04-11-06, 07:24 PM
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IP: D6DE 8AA8
I couldnt help but think of "London Bridge is Fallin DOwn, WHAT!? Fallin Down WHAT!?! Fallin Down"
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04-11-06, 07:24 PM
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IP: AC2A 692A
I liked this, beat was simple and complimented your flow n voice. Had a different rhymescheme, sounds clean and proffesional..good mixin.
Your flows consistant, hook works well enough, pretty decent flow on second verse is better imo. Good shit. If you could rtf thatd be cool. http://community.rapverse.com/showt...271#post2716271
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04-11-06, 08:03 PM
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OYD
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IP: 64CA 6C26
preciate da feed
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04-11-06, 08:14 PM
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The Alien Toung
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IP: 7996 9D6E
wow........lota feed quick
were u find this beat???????? lol not a BEAD hook..but ehh idk not my thing... flows killer...uranioum line had me thinking twice....lol @ u saying gimps...psyche multis were nice nice track bro
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04-11-06, 09:42 PM
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OYD
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IP: 64CA 6C26
preciate da feed
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