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Old 04-26-08, 04:58 PM   #1
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Got Soul? © vs MurDah

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10 - unlimited bars
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This is a multi battle!!! Vote on multis and technicality.



Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-26-08 at 07:58 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.


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Old 04-26-08, 05:17 PM   #2
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Old 04-26-08, 05:18 PM   #3
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Watch An Learn!!!

He WACK AND WEAK He Get ATTACKED AND BEAT Ockie Watch Your BACK FOR HEAT!
Get BLOWED AND BOMB DEAD! Ma FLOW RESPONDS WITH LEAD, NO CONFLICK But He'll admitt around here im "PACKIN MORE BEEF" Then ROSIE ODONELLS LEGS!!' 1
This SNITCH WANTS DRAMA ? SHIT THE LAMAS! a GIFT OF KARMA!
Hes a Homo Fore sure SQUEEZIN GUYYS!, So PLEASE REALIZE Punches'll "LEAVEM WITH ONE EYE' like the BITCH OFF FUTURE RAMA!' 2
Im OFTEN VENEMOUS! Ya DROPS HURENDOUS!
Ma GLOCKS STUPENDOUS! Leave this "Pussy Bleedin" Like CHOPPED CLITEROUS!' 3
Someone Please!!..POP THIS GEEK, thinking HE GOT THE HEAT
then STOP to COCK the PIECE.. but it went off then SHOT HIS FEET!!! 4
i'll knock the PIMPLES OFF YOUR FACE!!..yea..CATERIN YOUR WOUNDS
leavin DIMPLES IN THERE PLACE larger than the CRATERS ON THE MOON!!! 5
his eyes must be SCORN like lookin threw BENT WRONG SPECTICALS
your rhymes are more DEFORMED than in INGROWN TESTICLE!!! 6
he cant handle the GEOMETRY...i'd give em simple math MINUS AND PLUSES
but even his MOM WILL AGREE he never AMMOUNTED TO NUTHIN!!! 7
FAKIN A SCREAM MASK...trippin through bars like BREAKIN HIS KNEECAPS!!
this nigga was hooked on phonics...went STRAIGHT....THEN HE RELAPSED!!! 8
OF COURSE THIS IN MINE!!..cause YOU FORCING YOUR LINES!!
it's like the "Widow Makers BACK" the way i'm DIVORCING YOUR SPINE!!! 9
i make dollaz he couldnt make change with MAGGOTS N FLYS
this FAGGOTS A GUY? he can insult me? naw that was gun play so if we look in his multis, we see he's CAPPIN ALL LIES(capitolize) 10

iTZ MurDah
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Old 04-26-08, 05:54 PM   #4
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Old 04-26-08, 06:03 PM   #5
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check it.

Lowered my standards,I'm ashamed to even pronounce his name
douse his flame, Ill bounce this bitch straight out this game
hell keep praying, Kids rhymes are dryer than a drought In Spain
melt this lame like a crooked nosed wich caught out in rain
your sound is lame,I'm smoking you like a fresh trout in flame
Listen...
I'm a beast with words, eat this herb with the weakest verse
only time he in the street, Is when I bang his teeth in curbs
his speech is slurred, ayo I treat this nerd for what he is worth
I believe I heard, you the ugliest human anyone seen at birth
Fuck it....
My rhymes cover the nation like back packers on a mish
I'm suddenly facing a blasphemous honestness
always running and chasing the ass on the blondest bitch
ram a gun in ya face and demand for you not to twitch
check it......
I'm writing this for freedom fighting kids living a seedy life
and twist off liqour bottle lids see how thick my knowledge is
acknowledge this polished shit you cant abolish it
Instead of sperm in her cunt, your mother should of swallowed it
your hollow kid, follow this wisdom, Ill show you were college is
words are my hostages, raps needs me like asmatcis oxygens
My verse is murder, while yours is just a slap across the wrist.


Note:' Mish' is slang here for Mission.
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Old 04-26-08, 06:19 PM   #6
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decent drop kid better then i thought so lets drop the beef and keep it real my verse far from sweet and like i said im more raw and ruthless with punches and multies and wordplay so yea props on a decent drop but i believe you could of came harder then that no diss just saying the truth nice battle may the best man win

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Old 04-26-08, 07:38 PM   #7
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beef? Kid?

I just shat on your verse, get off your high horse son. Your not as good as you think you are.
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Old 04-27-08, 05:30 PM   #8
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you wish you did kid your multies was lack'in raw impact word you aint have no real good punch-lines and ya verse look like you had 4 different verse in it what the fuck are you talking about?

i shitted on you bottom line and i gave you a bit of credit for droping better then i thought you was some people just cant take a little they want a mile n half
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Old 04-27-08, 06:27 PM   #9
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lol, your a funny cunt ae? I dropped weak cause your wack son. let the votes decide.
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Old 04-27-08, 11:28 PM   #10
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Voted For: Got Soul? ©

He WACK AND WEAK He Get ATTACKED AND BEAT Ockie Watch Your BACK FOR HEAT!
Get BLOWED AND BOMB DEAD! Ma FLOW RESPONDS WITH LEAD, NO CONFLICK But He'll admitt around here im "PACKIN MORE BEEF" Then ROSIE ODONELLS LEGS!!' 1

Who's "Ockie"?? This bar makes it seem like you may have bitten it....O'donell leg's was funny though

(2/5)

This SNITCH WANTS DRAMA ? SHIT THE LAMAS! a GIFT OF KARMA!
Hes a Homo Fore sure SQUEEZIN GUYYS!, So PLEASE REALIZE Punches'll "LEAVEM WITH ONE EYE' like the BITCH OFF FUTURE RAMA!' 2

This line could have been done alot better...but it was pretty funny (3/5)

Im OFTEN VENEMOUS! Ya DROPS HURENDOUS!
Ma GLOCKS STUPENDOUS! Leave this "Pussy Bleedin" Like CHOPPED CLITEROUS!' 3

This doesn't rhyme, and its played wordplay as is (1/5)

Someone Please!!..POP THIS GEEK, thinking HE GOT THE HEAT
then STOP to COCK the PIECE.. but it went off then SHOT HIS FEET!!! 4

filler line's....(1/5)

i'll knock the PIMPLES OFF YOUR FACE!!..yea..CATERIN YOUR WOUNDS
leavin DIMPLES IN THERE PLACE larger than the CRATERS ON THE MOON!!! 5

more blah lines (2/5)

his eyes must be SCORN like lookin threw BENT WRONG SPECTICALS
your rhymes are more DEFORMED than in INGROWN TESTICLE!!! 6

lol, this was funny...(4/5)

he cant handle the GEOMETRY...i'd give em simple math MINUS AND PLUSES
but even his MOM WILL AGREE he never AMMOUNTED TO NUTHIN!!! 7

again, a played wordplay...but it was still funny (3/5)

FAKIN A SCREAM MASK...trippin through bars like BREAKIN HIS KNEECAPS!!
this nigga was hooked on phonics...went STRAIGHT....THEN HE RELAPSED!!! 8

this was played....sorry (1/5)

OF COURSE THIS IN MINE!!..cause YOU FORCING YOUR LINES!!
it's like the "Widow Makers BACK" the way i'm DIVORCING YOUR SPINE!!! 9

i liked this one...(3/5)

i make dollaz he couldnt make change with MAGGOTS N FLYS
this FAGGOTS A GUY? he can insult me? naw that was gun play so if we look in his multis, we see he's CAPPIN ALL LIES(capitolize) 10

this doesn't make sense, and it seems like it's bitten again. Due to the fact that he doens't capatlize any of his lines...and its completely forced. The wordplay was ok, at best. yet again though...(2/5)

Total: 17 /50

Most of your verus was forced, bitten or old played lines. Sorry, dude...but, just the way i see it. No hate


Lowered my standards,I'm ashamed to even pronounce his name
douse his flame, Ill bounce this bitch straight out this game
hell keep praying, Kids rhymes are dryer than a drought In Spain
melt this lame like a crooked nosed wich caught out in rain
your sound is lame,I'm smoking you like a fresh trout in flame
Listen...
I'm a beast with words, eat this herb with the weakest verse
only time he in the street, Is when I bang his teeth in curbs
his speech is slurred, ayo I treat this nerd for what he is worth
I believe I heard, you the ugliest human anyone seen at birth
Fuck it....
My rhymes cover the nation like back packers on a mish
I'm suddenly facing a blasphemous honestness
always running and chasing the ass on the blondest bitch
ram a gun in ya face and demand for you not to twitch
check it......
I'm writing this for freedom fighting kids living a seedy life
and twist off liqour bottle lids see how thick my knowledge is
acknowledge this polished shit you cant abolish it
Instead of sperm in her cunt, your mother should of swallowed it
your hollow kid, follow this wisdom, Ill show you were college is
words are my hostages, raps needs me like asmatcis oxygens
My verse is murder, while yours is just a slap across the wrist.


You verus was harder to break down like his was, due to the fact that the amount of bars in one line wasn't the same as his.

Multis: Much better than his were, and you obvisouly had much better flow.

Overal verus wise, Soul's was better. if the other dude hadn't had such forced and played lines, he would have killed you. You really had no personals and some old played lines.

vote: Soul

...in an audio, you would have killed him, but in this battle you barely won due to the fact that most of his lines were just forced and blah, just remmeber next time that text is just rated so much differently



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Old 04-28-08, 02:45 AM   #11
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Hey murdah way to bite you wack piece of shit...

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Old 04-28-08, 06:37 AM   #12
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He WACK AND WEAK He Get ATTACKED AND BEAT Ockie Watch Your BACK FOR HEAT!
Get BLOWED AND BOMB DEAD! Ma FLOW RESPONDS WITH LEAD, NO CONFLICK But He'll admitt around here im "PACKIN MORE BEEF" Then ROSIE ODONELLS LEGS!!' 1

Who's "Ockie"?? This bar makes it seem like you may have bitten it....O'donell leg's was funny thoug


OCKIE is a slang word FOOLS WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT!!!
OCKIE watch your feet is like saying:
PAPI watch your feet same as
FAM wacth your feet the same as
NIGGA better wacth yout feet same as
DUDE better watch hes feet the same as
this LAME better watch hes feet same as
FAGOT better watch hes feet same as this
HERB better watch hes feet same as
CHUMP better watch hes feet same as
FOOL better watch your feet

SHALL I GO ON?????

GET YA SHIT STRAIGHT!!!

LIKE I SAID YOU FOOL AINT FROM THE STREETS OR HOOD SO STAY IN YA PLACE!!

i cant believe ya fools
DONT BELIEVE ME ASK AROUND IN A HOOD NEAR YOU!!!
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Old 04-28-08, 07:19 PM   #13
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other guy is a biter......... so i dont think i really need to explain this vote

vote - GS
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Old 04-28-08, 07:27 PM   #14
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lol @ him still tryna defend the fact he bit. Waste a fucking time.
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Old 04-28-08, 07:47 PM   #15
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Originally Posted by MurDah
He WACK AND WEAK He Get ATTACKED AND BEAT Ockie Watch Your BACK FOR HEAT!
Get BLOWED AND BOMB DEAD! Ma FLOW RESPONDS WITH LEAD, NO CONFLICK But He'll admitt around here im "PACKIN MORE BEEF" Then ROSIE ODONELLS LEGS!!' 1

Who's "Ockie"?? This bar makes it seem like you may have bitten it....O'donell leg's was funny thoug


OCKIE is a slang word FOOLS WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT!!!
OCKIE watch your feet is like saying:
PAPI watch your feet same as
FAM wacth your feet the same as
NIGGA better wacth yout feet same as
DUDE better watch hes feet the same as
this LAME better watch hes feet same as
FAGOT better watch hes feet same as this
HERB better watch hes feet same as
CHUMP better watch hes feet same as
FOOL better watch your feet

SHALL I GO ON?????

GET YA SHIT STRAIGHT!!!

LIKE I SAID YOU FOOL AINT FROM THE STREETS OR HOOD SO STAY IN YA PLACE!!

i cant believe ya fools
DONT BELIEVE ME ASK AROUND IN A HOOD NEAR YOU!!!


this is by far and away, the best post in the last 6 months on this site
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