Good shit pexx....from one diamond to another lol u gettin better...seems like u more animated wit ur flow...I think this woulda been better on the IT beat "Point of No Return" (it would make the pace a bit faster). It's still cold though, 1.


please rtf

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...824#post3140824

Trip - man, everytime you peep one of my tracks you say that. lol i haven't rapped like that since late 05 man lol. it's 2007. but word, i feel your points perfectly. sounds like a sure fire recipie for an unmarketable track. be nice and a "hit" on RV, but in the real world, tracks liek that don't hold's peoples interest. nobody in the club or in their car wants to hear somebody's life story b. but word, thanks for the input anyway

omen - yeah i feel ya man. i dunno b if you don't see how these verses are related, then i duno what to say for ya man. you gotta have a certain life experience to relate to a song like this. and the stuff about slang, i mena if you think by sayin "ock" is hangin on sombody's nuts, you probably live in herb land. ock is like sayin dude. the rest of your comments about the content and stuff sounds liek a recipie for unflowed unmelodic unappealing tracks liek the ones you make. that'd be cool if i was happy with 6 people liking my stuff, but i leave that to cats like you. nobody's on my dick son, they just liek the music. if you made music people liked, you'd know what its like, nahmean?

soul - thanks b

smash - good lookin out mayne!

black drag - word man stoupe is a beast.

chron - ohhh shit son, i forgot about that diamond track you did haha that shit was ill son, how did the hook go again? word to the mother son i'll leave you feed. gotta see how you came up since the last time.



holla

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Fo sho fam, I agree completely that a overly lyrical track wouldn't work in the club or in the whip but this :

The anthem of anthems man. if you ever been the underdog, and everybody doubted you, this is your music.

^^^Gave me the impersonation that this wasn't meant to be a banger...the nature of an anthem is to speak on something everyone can relate to an in order to have a relatable song it has to have some sort of focus so I critiqued it from that viewpoint, not whether or not people could mindlessly bob they head to it. As a banger it works as a battle cry for the underdog it doesn't. Those are two separate things fam. an bout the flow man, c'mon man...jr & cam have a HIGHLY!! distinct flow...being in nyc all u hear is dipset, anyone in the tri-state would call u on that in a heartbeat.

But anyways son RETURN THE FAVOR:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240116

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playing....

beats solid... mixing is on point, feeling the content a this hook bro, vocals solid. feeling the verse bro, flows perfect for the beat. swaggers nice, lyrics are all good, nothiong overally tech but its decent.
dubs are placed perfect on the next verse, this somthing I would play on the regular, but proberly wont.lol.
3rd verse has that solid swagger again. tracks overally solid as fuck bro.

definitly a decent track bro, why you still fucking with RV?! take it to the man!!

lmao, yo trip i dunno why just because i said its the underdogs anthem you thought that meant "unmarketable music". i mean what did you expect, a "topical"? lmao that's only cool on the internet dog. i make music everybody can get down with all across the globe, and what you're describin, aint that. i mean i feel what you're sayin but in execution, its useless.

yo Tzar, thanks a lot man, def appreciate it. oh and don't worry, my ghostwriter demo's definitely pulling together!!

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i play super lyrical songs in my car all the time
i dont give a fuck what the passenger likes, I play what I WANT TO HEAR, ya dig

listening


i LIKE this track...the beat is pretty cool plus your flow on it?...got me nodding and...the title is pretty attractive for some reason!...i'm not an expert when it comes to mixing but outta that little i know i must say it all blended/mixed well..lyrics are cool,nothing wromng with 'em...lol ifdk why u kinna,i repeat,kinna sound a lil different on verse 3...the hooks are dope they just come in RIGHT all the way thru out the track!...lemme repeat myself....I LIKED THIS!


you cool keep it up!

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oh damn, i ain't seen yvonne around in a minute. nice to se ya come out retirement to peep this track son lol. thanks for the feed mayne you always keep it real

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dont' like the simple rhymes ,but its good for a more commercial song. and i think the vocals are a bit to0 loud over the beat. and what is that beat. sound familar
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240242
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rtf

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Meh ok...i kinda prefer you snappin on people but....

cool chorus they sayin i can't do it after i done did it....hahaha

the way they hold in me down is holding me back

so my fucking tshirts worth more than ya jeans jerk

my signs dollar signs....

what i'm selling ain't milk but i'm rolling in creme

Is an ok but the beat was more omnious than your presence, was looking for a harder delivery....more anger but when people hate that's just what i use.

back with the scars like the back of a slave

suck my nuts till they balling like jim jones roflmao

Not my favorite from you but like always,,, millions of quotables...

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