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04-10-05, 02:39 AM
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….ThE qUeStIoNaBlE rAmBlInGs Of A MaDmAn….
IP: A14B AE90
….ThE qUeStIoNaBlE rAmBlInGs Of A MaDmAn…. Ask me.....the task may-be....... maybe my last key.... Who blasts by three's......?.. Influencing catastrophes.. Grasp or mask weapons....! While i pass the sentence.. If its contenders.... then who bathes in their presence.. Who’s message....less then.... orphans in the question.. im guessing...im destined... like you but with aggression.. im confessing... im only as grown as my comprehension.. The songs we mention.. Stomp-in or stopping lessons..? Its testing throughout…. Worse then bruising doubt… Fused to bout…cuz haters hate to lose. So gladly im out… An amount of worth…not the earth, which I found is worse Mound or revert.. its just our fears were all bound to verse.. The ground may hurt but in the end, were merely vapor Paced or….late or …braced for mistakes by our saviors Save yours…of course ignorance will..Occur in tours Realness of more …seal this by 2’s and 4’s outdoors… My questionable’s…at this time seem sensible to mine Ramblings are signs.. that a madman exists within my mind . . ¤ÐÅž¤
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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04-10-05, 02:41 AM
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IP: A14B AE90
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ONLY REQUEST BY THE AUTHOR:NO BEEF IN THIS THREAD
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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04-10-05, 09:51 AM
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IP: E58E DC1F
ha first thing i notice were the hot multis and wordplay...
The ground may hurt but in the end, were merely vapor Paced or….late or …braced for mistakes by our saviors Save yours…of course ignorance will..Occur in tours Realness of more …seal this by 2’s and 4’s outdoors… ^my favorite portion and what not.. i'm feeling the concept and how you made it look as if a Madman worte it with the title being half capital and have lower case, and the break offs throughout the lines.. very creative and i dun think nobody hit this topic before it's very original.. stay up kid.. get at me. 1
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04-10-05, 04:40 PM
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IP: A14B AE90
thanx fiya..."call me kid...im older then you"!...
lol...sa'll good pumpkin..appreciate the feed........uppin...
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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04-10-05, 04:52 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 3CAE 6243
I'm to tired to leave feed, hit me up on msn if you want feed, lol, good shit Daz, nicely shaking the rust off man, good shit, liked the structure, and the concept, one of the better om's, okay vocab, overall coo drop, 8.5/10
 return the favor... links in the sig Last edited by ~Genius~ : 04-10-05 at 04:59 PM. |
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04-10-05, 05:00 PM
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www.militantmusic.com
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IP: F588 BB20
nice shit here vocab tight multies crazy wordplay was sick structre good flow tight
8/10
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04-10-05, 07:33 PM
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in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
you are pretty mad (for voting for marv) nah, just messing, this was a dope piece, i was enjoying how random it was, yet it all fit the context of the message you were geting across, good multies, very interesting to read, kept me reading, which is good, funny wordplay, haha, overall, this was just sizzling, keep up man.....there should be a feature open mic of the week or sump, and put this there, haha
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04-11-05, 01:52 AM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: A14B AE90
^^thanx for the feed kesse.........uppin
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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04-11-05, 02:27 AM
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IP: 2E49 AA2B
nice OM, feelin wat u writin and wat u gettin at, nice multis
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04-11-05, 09:23 AM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: A14B AE90
thanx for the feed..^^tilt n the rest ill return feed sometime today
sup sup sup up up....
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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04-11-05, 02:21 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: 342A DA98
oh, come on Daz and I thought you didnt write poetry. What I inspire ya! (LoL) Keep this shit comin not really to much bad anyone can say about this one.
Late.. Sweft
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04-11-05, 03:54 PM
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IP: A14B AE90
nah sweft i do topicals but specialize in battlin...lol
i might start poetry....but not for a while...this was just a trial run i suppose....more a concept ive been thinking bout for a while...
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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04-11-05, 04:17 PM
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The story goes. Bill, B.
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IP: 606D F99A
I'lll leave three words for ya...Hall Of Fame...thats all this is some of the best usage of wordply and multis i've seen on RV( though i only been here a few months)...keep this shit up fam...10/10...rtf in my sig
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04-11-05, 05:58 PM
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IP: A14B AE90
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im glad you understood it, some didnt...lol.. ill be sure to return the favour when i get back online.... 
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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04-11-05, 09:57 PM
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IP: A14B AE90
uppin............
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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