I wasn't really feelin the effect on the first vocals, flow was ok decent delivery, hmm maybe it's on the whole track i dunno if it's soundclick or what, but it sounds wack. Second guy is chill, good flow, delivery could be more pronounced but it's consistent. Third guy was pretty solid like the second. Good drop overall tho, holla at ya boi

dope ass collab..... for some reason tho, i dont really feel the hook...... like the effect u put on it..... that aint hiphop, man!......... i like the speedup alot for the hook, but if u put that effesct on it, i suggest takin it out

I dont even needa give feed on the verses, u all dropped fire..... no messups, nice flow, didnt sound like u rushed at all....... it does sound like CALAM mighta recorded at like 2 am with some of that emotion, but i could tell that he was tryna do a whole breakdown, and thats y emotion was lost......

the verses really carried the track very well.....pc

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yea this is pure dopeness...........
lyrics was nice....yall already know that......beat is tight.....i actually like the hook for some odd reason......flow was good with everyone.....delivery was good from all......overall this was a nice track.....i was definitely feelin it.........stay up

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im feelin that shit
beat is pretty nice
verses definatly have a nice flow,delivery,lyrics

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I already did a track to this and mine was wayyyyyyy better. This was fucking horrible.

I mean, learn to rhyme. >_<

The damn beat is sampled from Hotel California obviously, so yeah, talk about drugs and shit. Not history of Hip-Hop which most of you don't know shit about.

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wheres ya audio wiggy ?

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the wig.. iknow u .. i saw u here a while back.. and u fuckign sucked.. u probably still fuckign suck... u got beat repeadetly... u got no respect.. take ya faggot ass netcee wannabe black ass to some AA meeting.... your not even CLOSE to calam sev or tony.... period ?

Matter of fuckin fact,

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/wigmusic.htm


thats ya soundclick.... now dont evenr post ya bullshit hater coimments in a good thread ever again or ima have u banned for idiocy

Whats up. that kick isnt working for me. Your quality is alright. Good Meaning to the song. The first verse good. Closer was alright. Had meaning to it. But it kinda stalled. 2nd Flow is on point. This is a good verse, deep. Sometimes you would speed up words which kind threw it off. But still good. 3rd guy. I like this. I dont know what the hat has to do with this though. Your verse is alright. Nothing made me really say man.. in this verse. 2nd kat was close to it. Liked his shit alot. Keep this coming yall. Later

I got beat in one tournament because I did a rush record. Big fucking deal.

Check the record bitch. 3-0.

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Typing as I listen: Man, you must love reverb. This shit ruined the intro completely IMO. Beat is pretty hot - but reverb is too high in the first verse IMO. Lyrics and flow in the first verse are dead on and net-flow isn't anywhere in the vicinity. Second verse, pretty clear - still too high on the reverb though. Lyrics were on. Chorus - damn, DEF gotta roll that reverb back at least another 30%. It's more effects than beats which is a recipie for poision. Third verse - same thing, reverb was too much, lyrics were solid, flow was great. All in all - coulda been an Album-quality track if the reverb weren't added so goddamn heavyhandedly. Definite banger.

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ROFL... ok ? you still suck.. ya soundclick shows it.. bybye

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Proud OYD member again . <------- That is whassup

nice shit. Seven, ill flow, lyrics tight as fuck, yo. props on this shit. Good shit

Tony had nice verse too. Pretty dope lyrics, and flow was pretty good.


calam, damn dude. lol hot shit. flow lyrics, damn. tight shit. Can't say more

beat ill too. props on this shit. 9/10 yo

RTF on my track wit Senser pc