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Old 02-01-04, 12:48 PM   #16
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hot ass piece by both
webster was all in there, endidng was hot, just to more dope mc's
just keep dong what yall doing
but never think that you cant do better in anything you write
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Old 02-01-04, 03:33 PM   #17
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Props....
This is the kind of piece i like reading....
imagery filled exciting drop...
Skiddz...you part was dope nice flow could use more multis, but overall 8/10
Com...AWESOME...flow was great...had multis, mettas, and the ending was sick...9/10

Overall colab 8.5/10
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Old 02-01-04, 07:03 PM   #18
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thx man...
uppin....................
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Old 02-09-04, 11:11 PM   #19
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Nice shit right there...

Flow was good, topic was good but i know u didnt come up wit it lol

Wordplay was good, good way of tellin a story... I esp liked this line...

The People living in the streets, daily life goes by Unconsciously
Until that day, life is threatened, they can see Lights from Heaven
But You come like A messenger, and you are Protecting…
Because obviously, Heaven is Not Accepting…

Both did great nice stuff. Esp good for a first open mike by COM
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Old 02-10-04, 06:56 AM   #20
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Old 02-10-04, 07:37 AM   #21
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interesting topic, and nice perception of it, it made for a good read,... both used it well... and the wordplay was essential i thought to this drop... really set the scene.... nice from both, but outta the 2 thought COM jus edged it, more creative, but still both handled it very nicely.... a good match
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Old 02-12-04, 12:20 PM   #22
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Old 02-14-04, 04:25 AM   #23
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