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12-20-03, 04:19 PM | #1 | ||||
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(Point Of View vs. Soft Focus) Taktik vs. Rule
IP: 5F2A E1C0
Topic : A Life Made Up Of Wants
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12-20-03, 09:49 PM | #2 | |||||||
fuCKYou
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IP: 1B3B C284
check!
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12-22-03, 12:39 AM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 4577 CD9A
rules not on elite list........moved..........>>>@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@
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12-22-03, 11:34 AM | #4 | |||||||
..Soft Focus..
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IP: 1B3B C284
Check in....i'll have my verse done soon------------------------good luck----------------------------------------------------------------------------
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Open Mics The Weathers Art http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673 My Teenage Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850 Secluded http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851 Open Your Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461 |
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12-22-03, 12:08 PM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 1B3B C284
A Life Made Up Of Wants
From dawn to dusk I awaite my poor parents to slave to give Me every little material property that makes life easier to live Pay checks came in every thursday and then vanished quick There an gone as the past I didn't realise I was selfish 1 bit Priorities of mine were to obtain a image of toys and candy I didn't understand the stress I caused for mommy an daddy Extremly selfish I was but to young to grasp for the right path So I persued my actions made life fall like sand in the glass Caused my moms neck to sieze from all the overtime worked A lump of coal I deserved but my parents didn't want me hurt Kept giving an giving until there pride was gone in the mist Finally I got screamed at to not be greedy but I couldn't resist Infomarcials showin me a blue print to fun claiming friendship Thus I was a lonely child thought having could loon a tight grip Broke my parents heart took the arrow out shot from the cupid Punished me more with flashes in my eyes from being stupid I was carried away with such greed it evaperated my true life Departed my family and made my emptiness prevail to strife No more asking for snowboards, cars and certian type cloths Praying now that everytime I went to ask for something I froze Returned favers talked mym mom out of counciling for stress Told her open her wings to dad and return to the natural nest I'll behave like a gentlemen behavier to destroy aspects of hell Wont ask for things so my self esteem comes out of the shell I'm sorry for leaving you frustrated but this is all I want now A family a home security to show love that wont break down I'll impervise for my property in life my familys my propaganda The only thing that matters.... To me the true property that if I lose it i'll have amnesia I'll take life for what it is not for what i have or want Property isn't building blocks it doesnt create happiness I'm glad I learned something from life and my acomplises My family the true meaning of what you need to get by You don't need certian gifts you need family to survive A life made up of wants created an art of lost and hate But because of the redirection The missing pieces of the puzzle were put back in place ^^^there ye go Good Luck Peace
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Open Mics The Weathers Art http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673 My Teenage Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850 Secluded http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851 Open Your Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461 |
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12-27-03, 09:37 PM | #6 | ||||
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IP: 5F2A E1C0
Rule Wins via Taktik No Showed
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12-31-03, 10:07 AM | #7 | |||||||
..Soft Focus..
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IP: CE0C B4D7
uppen to get this closed
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Open Mics The Weathers Art http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673 My Teenage Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850 Secluded http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851 Open Your Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461 |
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