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Old 02-27-04, 06:19 PM   #1
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Champion Beat!!!!!!!!

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its the champion beat, some feedbak needed

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Old 02-28-04, 06:59 PM   #2
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It's missing something. The claps are like off. This is nothing that would make it on the radio or on anybody's album. Out of 10, I give it a 2. Sorry.
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Old 04-01-04, 07:06 AM   #3
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yeh that is hot, good job
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Old 04-10-04, 04:47 AM   #4
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Old 04-10-04, 10:16 AM   #5
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Lol ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ But anywayz nice beat man
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Old 05-04-04, 04:29 PM   #6
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lol nice beat that was koo
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Old 05-05-04, 02:16 PM   #7
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Not bad, i like it, keep it up
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Old 05-11-04, 03:14 AM   #8
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to ben2000:
that flow up there was off.. lol. i dont even know what to think about that shit....

but concerning the beat,
im confused why its called the chapion beat. I was thicking id hear some fierce orchestral hits and what not... but its very different. even so i liked it, and btw the claps aren't even the center of attention, so it really doesn't matter if they are a tad off. I do think that the beat is pretty repetitive, so maybe add a lil transition to something new, or just a fill here and there.. Work on the mix and give it a couple finishing touches then lets hear it. btw liked how the end switched slightly.

just my few pennies
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Old 05-18-04, 12:27 AM   #9
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Old 05-20-04, 06:44 AM   #10
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it was alright i wasn't really feelin it but better then i could do. so....good work
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Old 05-20-04, 07:28 AM   #11
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Its pretty good

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Its Pretty good, the main looping sound sounds kind of oldschool though...Maybe trying to put another insturment there would help it?
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Old 05-21-04, 03:14 PM   #12
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its decent.....could use sum werk....but u got a decent beat......needs mroe flavor to it.....
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Old 05-21-04, 04:36 PM   #13
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not bad... needs more to it though. too basic.

i couldnt rap on it... but keep doin ya thing
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