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Old 01-08-06, 01:04 AM   #1
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The Day The Clock Spoke

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As the grains of sand beat & batter the frames of man
From the shameless plans on to the courageous stands
Ageless shams go on to badger the most unknowing foe
As time stoped with brevity to listen as the clock spoke:

..I've stood apart with aloof dignity for many a century..
But now I feel it's time that I taught with lucid creativity
Pitty thee, for we, the everlasting have come to watch
As humanity dissasembles every bearing .. every clock
Barely able, to walk unaided through the test time bears
As crime tears lives and cares not for whats right, see?

Been called a wrist watch my most, Grandfather by some
But very few spot, gloat and watch the sand's of time run
These hands of mine drum to a beat that never changes
So discreat it goes unnoticed up until the turn of ages
Printed pages burn to keep record of account's for facts
But they've never watched a species die & bounce back

I've heard your call, time after time .. with livid imagery
And so I want to ask why you keep on pretending in me
Little do you know .. I stand neither for or against you
Before you were issued I had other things to attend to
You're minor, unimportant .. A casual insight to chaos
Seen more benign hordes gorge an' ignite the pay off
You're really nothing. Another stray thought for an epoch
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Old 01-08-06, 01:04 AM   #2
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Old 01-08-06, 04:27 AM   #3
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was ok vocab seemed forced
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Old 01-08-06, 08:05 AM   #4
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How about you force your wack comments to shut the fuck up?

& this was a key I did when I was drinking last night.
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Old 01-08-06, 01:36 PM   #5
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word, fresh concepts, came out alright for a key

These hands of mine drum to a beat that never changes
So discreat it goes unnoticed up until the turn of ages

twas a dope line there, keep up...rtf
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Old 01-11-06, 06:59 PM   #6
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uppppppppppppppp this leave feed and i will rtf
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Old 01-12-06, 09:44 PM   #7
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yeah braw nice drop it sound like it flowed so easy and ol dude that said it was forced he don't know what he talkin about i thought it seemed like it just rolled of the tounge if anything i could learn from you hey try to hit up my at 16 piece if you get the chance thanx playa holla at cha boi
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