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~k-trini~ 5 100.00%
!Impact! 0 0%
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Old 07-20-05, 07:13 PM   #16
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Fine If you win you win man!! but thers no need to cry coz someone didnt like your verse m8you acted like a lil boy which you probs are so just look at ma avatar thats wot i think of yah ... ill see yah around m8
 
Old 07-20-05, 07:31 PM   #17
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Voted For: ~K-Trini~

ayo homie your was just ill man more word play homie check

this cats about as far from dopeness as ploto is to the sun.
he shows off as much skill as he does his record...............................NONE
now that lines originality at it's best

if i keep rollin i ceep merkin
it'll be your jaw guy im hurtin
now that line sucked man he KO your as impact!!!!!!!!!!!!hahaha................

ayo check

let me school lil newb and let me take him back to school
bitch make ur lines longer...k-tini kidnapped this fool.
bitch dont know shit look at his vocab and structure
this was no contest might as well impact cuz u a buster.
yea you may think you dope bitch look twice CLICK CLACK.
homie that's the sound of my clock thats gon make a real impact.
keepin it goin lessons will hit ya ears catch contact
like a hitman i get pain for keepin wanna be's dispatched
!!!!!!!!!!!!hahaha..............vote goes to k trini no doubt..........keep elevatin impact
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Old 07-20-05, 07:51 PM   #18
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i cant vote on this cause trini is in my crew but damn nice drop trini
 
Old 07-20-05, 07:57 PM   #19
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ah shit DAMN i forgot yo narc.................PM me i vote has to be disqualified cuz im in his crew.........shit i forgot o well then that just feed back homie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 07-20-05, 08:04 PM   #20
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Voted For: ~K-Trini~

yo k-trini won this battle man he had so punches and wordplay
impact elevate battle more to work on your punches personals word play and all around flow man not hate

return the favor at my battle here aight:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200482
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Old 07-22-05, 02:23 AM   #21
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Voted For: ~K-Trini~

If i keep rollin and i ceep merkin/
it'll be your jaw guy im hurtin/
wack no punch stop glorifyin urself

Draw for the shank nd start insertin/
and i'll leave real blood still squirtin/
once again no punch

In the night... you'll catch me lerkin/
I'll stab you in the back while your workin/
no punch

Strangle you with some wire or string/
Body built upper-cut then i swing/
wack ur not hard so stop trying

Ill brake your heart just like a disket/
and i wont find trini just like a comet/
wack didnt even rhyme :/

Come heavely just like the blitz/
and ill take you to parts and ill take you to bitz/
no punch really
all ur lines were corny and played so work on creativity metaphores and vocab oh yea and try to put a personal in ur battle
ok other kid no need to break it down ur flow was better but u had personasls
all i can say is work on ur vocab and try not to use as many fillers
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